Cowboys In the Badlands

Cowboys in the Badlands


The horses need be reined tightly
lest they show better judgment
and head back to the barn.  The
cowboys, driven by the dust cloud
of following hoof beats, were less smart.
A Gila monster smirks as they pass
knowing what waits ahead is to be
more painful than the rope they flee.
Driven by the torments of a lost war,
a lost home, a lost dream, they had
lashed out at the hunger, fled the
hovels of a shanty town and swore
to exact payment any way possible.
The consequences of the decision
pursued them, consumed them,
as they rested the horses.  The horses
must rest, they never would.
They stood overlooking the badlands,
shimmering heat’s forever fallacy,
that somehow you would cross to
safety, find an oasis, escape.  Oh,
you may escape the posse, maybe
even the past, but you will not
escape the bitterness of these
bad lands and their unforgiving
demands.  Few have come here
willingly, fewer have remained
once tested by the dryness, the
drought, the wind, sand, and
anger of a land seeking to be
left alone.  And so they rode into
the abyss of sand and stone
leaving only the hoof prints
of fading memory.  Bandanas
covered their faces, hat brims
covered their eyes.  They rode
until the horses fell, unable to
continue.  Horseless, they staggered
in the shifting sands laughing
as they recalled staggering from
the saloon on that awful night.
The night they gave up, the night
they gave in to the desperate desire
to be free.  A desire that was now
to be fulfilled in these Bad Lands.

For Isaiah Zerbst – Cowboys in the Badlands poetry contest
9/15/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/22/2014 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations John on your win. I loved it the first time I read it.
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:56:00 PM
My throat is sticking together, John. Great write, great win. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful write, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:39:00 AM
You gave us a true story of what it must have been like more often than not. Congrats on a fine win...BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:11:00 AM
very descriptive write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John. You had great descriptions in your verse.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/21/2014 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Brenda your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2014 9:26:00 PM
I like a lot of things in this poem; the word choice, the impact it has on me, the clarity. It is all fabulous! Only drawback is some lines are not in the right place. Generally, lines in poetry should be placed where it is convenient for a slight pause, almost like a comma.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/21/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thanks Isaiah, first for sponsoring the contest and secondly for your comment and input. I reread the poem a few times and can see where the line breaks could have been used to create a more enjoyable rhythm and read.
Date: 9/16/2014 5:02:00 PM
Great write I hope you do well in the contest. I took a different approach. After reading yours I am re-thinking mine. Giving this a 7 and I am adding you to my fav poets.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2014 9:25:00 PM
Ah, Maurice, you flatter me. Thank you for reading my work and for your comments, interest and input is always appreciated.
Date: 9/16/2014 9:48:00 AM
Interesting write on the culture of the cowboys, John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for checking in Dr. Mehta, there should be some interesting poems submitted for this contest.
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