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A man named Ben stood on a slope looking at the gates of hell, He swore they’d never turn back, him and his best friend Del. They knew the bandits came this way, they’d left a sloppy trail, Sheriff and posse had given up but they, would never fail. He reached into his saddle where he pulled some paper out, Posters of the bandits, who had brought them on this route There was Crooked Jake a killer who was merciless and drear, He shot you if you looked at him, his colleges were full of fear. Then came Baba Barber as hairy as a lamb, But nothing gentle about this one, he head-butt’s like a ram. The third was Festus Farlow a man with just one eye, Yet the fastest gun in Texas causen many a widow to cry. Ben turned to Del and with a sigh he mounted his beige mare, Said, “guessen we’d better git started, Del ma frind tek care.” The two had ridden hours with bandanas on their face, Which only helped a little, for sand was all they could taste. Both saw many carcasses and bones, bleached white from sun, But also knew these badlands are not a place for fun. All at once Del’s stallion, stood with hoofs boxing empty air, Sent him flying to the ground, and in a rattlers face did stare. Now when he fell he’d landed on a hard and rocky bed, So he grabbed a stone and in a flash, crushed that rattlers head. Ben had reached for his riffle ready to take a shot, Knowing the sound of gunfire would give away their spot. Six days later found cowboys, with cracked lips and weary bones, Now huddled by the campfire listening to familiar tones. High up on the rocky hill, a wolf sang to the skies, His silhouette rare beauty, appeasing to their eyes. Still sleeping at the crack of dawn, a voice woke them abrupt, Crooked Jake stood before them, his hand his gun did cup. He started laughing at the two still lying there in bed, And Ben and Del were certain, that they would soon be dead. Now Festus and old Baba, were going through their sacks Finding pictures of two women, they had just shot in their backs, Then they took their horses, saddles, hats and boots, sayen ‘’You’s ain’t gunna need these, when Festus Farlow shoots.” Two good friends were shaking now as a dozen shots rang out, And when loud echoes finally ceased, dead bandits lay about. Ben and Del stood in a daze, and checked for bullet holes, The sheriff and posse had come back, God, bless their souls. 10.03.2014 For Isaiah Zerbst Contest: Cowboys in the Badlands 2nd

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Date: 10/22/2014 10:13:00 PM
superb Brenda love it congrats on your very fine win hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/23/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, yours was great also.
Date: 10/22/2014 1:03:00 PM
You are a great storyteller Brenda, and I enjoy a good ending where the villains get what they deserve. Congrats on another merited win. // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 4:00:00 PM
And thanks.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 3:59:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Paul.
Date: 10/22/2014 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Brenda, and well done. We have been making the transition to Florida, outfitting our condo, blah, blah, blah. I just have not had time for the soup. Feel like I am way out there somewhere. Got to catch up. Hope you are doing well.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Faye, soon you'll find more time again to relax and we'll see more of you again.
Date: 10/22/2014 11:36:00 AM
A nice story you have told so well, congrats
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta.
Date: 10/22/2014 10:37:00 AM
You should turn this into a short story ..its great. Congrats on a BIG win. BG
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, and thanks for the tip.
Date: 10/22/2014 8:40:00 AM
Wow, Brenda, what an awesome story in rhyme! I really enjoyed this - so much detail. A 7 for me! Congratulations on your high placement in this contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 10:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/22/2014 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda on your very high rating with this poem.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Maurice
Date: 10/22/2014 6:02:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan XOXO
Date: 10/22/2014 1:00:00 AM
Awesome Brenda... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Well written story... Verlena
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/22/2014 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Verlena
Date: 10/21/2014 9:18:00 PM
A nice story here, fully utilizing suspense and unpredictability. Excellent characterization as well. Only thing I could suggest would be a little more description of surroundings, such as what the gates of hell look like.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/21/2014 11:31:00 PM
Thanks so much for your placing me second. I am honoured Isaiah.
Date: 10/5/2014 11:00:00 AM
Wonderful write and great story Brenda. I see our writing styles are very similar and thus can relate to the time and effort it takes in telling such a wonderful story. Great job Brenda. Thank you for your nice comment also.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Vincent.
Date: 10/4/2014 11:41:00 AM
WOW. This is simply awesome. I love it. All my best wishes for you in the contest. love and prayers, Gina
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:55:00 PM
Thanks heaps Regina.
Date: 10/4/2014 9:37:00 AM
a really gripping beautiful story brenda held me to the the last excellent pen really enjoyed
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 10:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Liam.
Date: 10/4/2014 5:34:00 AM
A fascinating poem-story very descriptive and captivating! One may think he watches an old western! Excellent, a seven! Good luck on the contest!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios
Date: 10/3/2014 8:59:00 PM
Wow, I knew you were good---but this---my goodness---are you watching Saturday westerns----like someone else I know. lol
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 9:29:00 PM
Yipper, I love my western Saturdays lo,.
Date: 10/3/2014 4:46:00 PM
Gosh this brought back so many good memories and I adore the name Festus....Thanks Maam'
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2014 6:28:00 PM
I grew up watching them with my dad.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 6:08:00 PM
I still watch western movies when I can. I'm thrilled you liked it.
Date: 10/3/2014 4:28:00 PM
Wow, just like those good old fashion Western flicks. The cavalry always saved the day. Great write Brenda, great story. I hope this does well in the contest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 6:05:00 PM
Darn, I never thought of having the trumpets blowing and the Calvary showing up. I loved them in the movies. No I only thought of the sheriff sneaking up on them. I was thinking of him using them as bait but was afraid of running out of room.
Date: 10/3/2014 2:32:00 PM
brilliant descriptive write Brenda - you do pen a brilliant tale here my friend. Good luck in the contest. I love the names of the characters you have created LOL:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thankya mam.

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