Cowboy Train To Heaven

Standing all alone, at the edge of time. With no where left to fall, and no where else to climb. I feel like I'm standing back at the end of the line. Of that soul collecting train that I missed the very first time. It don't matter much to me you see, I'm just going to stand right here and wait. For that golden train to pull in, that's taken me to the pearly gates. When that train pulls out your going to hear me yell. As I'm leaving this here place that is now a man made hell. Where all the politics and corruption, of this once great and mighty place. Turned into need and greed that just fills me with disgrace. Now I am far from perfect, God knows that is true. But, I'm praying for forgiveness, and I suggest, that you do too. So when that train pulls in to take us from this man made hell. Grab the seat right next to me and we can both then yell! YEEEEEEEEE HAAAAAAA!!!
Dan Kearley: 3-24-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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McBride  Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Amen my brother should be called one nation under the beast, for man is the beast, until Jesus separates us from this wicked world, and breathes in new life making us acceptable to not remain here
Fields Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 8:59 AM
You are kind of nailing that to a new degree. It's been a long time coming, and this was such a sync. to this very space and time. your friend in the pen/G.Fields
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Long time no see Dan. I hope you are well.
O'Leary Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Yeah... this place has really gone to hell... and we just let it happen... Excellent write, Dan!! Terry
Adelakun Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Dan, I LIKE this poem; thanks for writing it! And, thanks for visiting my corner.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 8:07 PM
I love it Dan, I could see this one on the country charts! I also wanted to say thanks for choosing my poem!
Dalei Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Very brilliant write. Entire poem is enriched with so many great lines. Very nice concept and well matched title. I enjoyed.~7~.........with love.
La France Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Dan, this is fantastic, I loved your sense of humour touched with lots of truth, and I see you do like rhyme that tells a story and do it well, 7 ~
Breidenthal Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Beautiful, uplifting work, Dan. It has almost the quality of a song, this verse. Never a disappointment, reading your work! Keep it up!!Always, Laura
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