Cowboy Hoe Down

On a Sunday in the evening
The old barn becomes a hall
Social place where every weekend
The town folk go for a ball.

The inside is decorated  
Lights are lit, the banners sway
By the walls barrels and cartwheels
Wooden stools and bales of hay.

Everybody loves a shindig
Where square dancing is the craze
Violins, guitars and banjos
Hillybilly music plays.

There’s a guy who’s always present
He’s the handsome Cowboy Kurt
On his head a leather Stetson
Dressed in jeans and chequered shirt.

Carol comes in golden pigtails
Gorgeous looking in flared skirt
She stands out; her smile is charming
She is hot and likes to flirt.

Cowboy Kurt looks quite appealing
He taps his feet to the beat
As other couples are reeling
Pretty Carol takes a seat.

Kurt decides to mosey on up
And lay his heart on the line
See if Carol would share some grub
Perhaps a swig of moonshine.

Tiny Carol surprises Kurt
Chugging down half a bottle
She eyes him coyly, looking pert
Then starts to jig full throttle.

Stunned Kurt is reeling to and fro
As wee Carol takes the lead
Dance floor clears; they put on a show
Kurt looks like a tumbleweed.

Music wouldn’t stop fast enough
For Kurt who couldn’t square dance
Carol is made of tougher stuff
And has high hopes for romance.

Totally lit and loving it
Carol trots to the outhouse
But when she returns, Kurt has split
“Where’s my man?” Carol does grouse

In his truck Kurt has hit the trail
Head still spinning from the dance
Carol sits upon a hay bale
Hoping he’ll return to prance.

After the hoe down was over
Banjos and fiddles tucked away
Cowboy Kurt was still a rover
Out cold on the hay Carol lay.



*Written October 6, 2014 
by Paul Callus and Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/8/2014 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn!! So pleased with this podium finish! This hoe down has finished on a high! hugs // paul
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:10:00 PM
I'll be reciting this terrific poem, giving you credit of course, today at the 65th annual encampment of the Death Valley '49ers.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/8/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, but I can't see your name. Feel free to read anything I wrote or share it with anyone.
Date: 11/5/2014 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you. That was quite a story of the hoedown dance. It was fun though. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:17:00 PM
I love this vibrant description Carolyn congrats on 2nd place and ty for entering hugs
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:36:00 PM
wonderful collaboration Carolyn and paul many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Jan :) hugs // paul
Date: 11/5/2014 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn and Paul on your win in the Cowboy Hoe Down Contest.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2014 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Maurice...for the congrats and the great comments you passed in your previous visit. // paul
Date: 10/11/2014 5:44:00 AM
Dear Carolyl, stopped by to say hello and to thank you for once again writing with me. Collaboration can be so very rewarding and pleasurable. I also wish to thank all the ones who are visiting and leaving their encouraging comments. Love and hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/11/2014 6:12:00 AM
Believe me, Paul, I have never enjoyed co-writing more than when we collaborate. You make it so easy to follow your inspiration!
Date: 10/10/2014 5:17:00 PM
this is fun Carolyn. It is the first time that I have tried to write with someone but I think we meshed pretty well. Good luck. Joyce
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Date: 10/9/2014 11:34:00 AM
Excellent, Carolyn. I love a good story, and this is a great one, told splendidly. Thanks for the smile! Jim
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Date: 10/6/2014 5:22:00 PM
Excellent write Carolyn, great colab with Paul. You two have just set a very high bar for this contest. Congratulation on this wonderful poem and so much fun too.
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Date: 10/6/2014 3:58:00 PM
What fun you had with the theme, Paul and Carolyn! I'm sure it will make Shadow grin from ear to ear. Good luck in her contest!
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Date: 10/6/2014 1:16:00 PM
- There was much dancing in the barn "the old days" in Norway too - Young and old were transported by truck or tractor to the farm - Carol and many other beautiful young girls / ladies come in golden pigtails and their new ironed blouses .... ., and their "Sunday shoes" - enjoy reading this poem from you Carolyn & Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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