Courtship

I watched a sparrow on the ground
With an insistent tweet.
Another bird flew over,
Bringing her a bite to eat.

This ritual repeated,
With some crumbs from beak to beak.
I Googled this behavior and
I learned I’d had a peek

At a fine display of courtship,
Not so different from our own.
Without the wine and tablecloths,
A seed had still been sown.

I guess it’s universal -
When it comes to pitching woo,
The sharing of a meal is what
Most couples tend to do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Much better than in the olden "caveman" days when a bop on the head and being dragged off to a cave den was "de rigeur". A fine read, Ilene.
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 3:57 AM
aww so charming Ilene, shame they weren't love bird not sparrows:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 7:44 AM
- A witness to a proposal ... beautiful poem, Ilene :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Beautifully written, Ilene:-) Have a blessed day...
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