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Peter and I have been a couple for 4 years.
Is it funny - odd funny - that we still mack-out in elevators?

Every time we kiss I feel like I’ve won the man-lottery,
that I’m counting and spending the loot all at once.
The man stirs my chemicals.

The bell dings and we separate like caught kids.
The inside elevator door’s mirrored - he’s so handsome. 

I know writers are alchemists, that we’re guilty, at times, 
of gilding the ordinary until it shines - but he’s the real deal.
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Songs for this:
There goes my baby by Kelly Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Fallica Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Elevator kisses? Amateurs! . . . Call me when youse make love in a VW camper parked adjacent the JFK TWA terminal immediately after being reunited. / <3
Vionet Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 10:54 AM
Making a note.. "buy a van." =]
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