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i lied when i was lying and i walked where i was walking. i lived when i was living and i died when i was dying i slept when i was sleeping and i dreamt when i was dreaming. i lost when i was losing and i knelt when i was kneeling. i drank when i was drinking and i fell and kept on falling. i was holy but never holier i was strange but never a stranger.

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Date: 8/17/2012 5:09:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Nathan. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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