Country Life

The night descends with a button down moon
against a powder blue comforter sky,
fluffed and puffed with the down of seed
cat and nine tails bursting with pride.

The mothers have called the dinnertime
and the scent of soups on the wind,
sneakers are stacked by the backdoor, 
the dog knows, it time to come in.

The table once set is abandoned
for the trays by the big screen TV,
and autumn gourds and chrysanthemums
abandoned on the tables display.

Soon, silhouettes form on the den walls
and children are hurried to bed,
with the call of a wild coyote they run
diving beneath their bedspreads.

All the human light dims, as they hideout
and starlight covers their ceiling,
Mom has places plastic stars of Venus and Mars
to usher in dreams, as they’re drifting.

Oh, the night with its warmth will not last
and soon the chill dawn will arrive
with the call of a neighborhood rooster,
ah,  the country’s the place to be alive!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cartlidge Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Wow Debbie I love this one, it gives a real sense of the homeliness of the country. As you read you almost feel that you're wrapped in those bedspreads and comforters. A brilliant piece, really glad this was the last I read before bedtime. Thanks for sharing. Simon
Maverick Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:27 PM
You are really brightening up my night here Debbie, great write for me:) i love its simplicity..thanks for posting.!
Devonshire Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 2:40 PM
What a great mood you create here, Deb. Twilight brights out the dreamers as well as the demons (in this case just a coyote) as children hide beneath the covers. How cool that mom has placed plastic "Venus and Mars" on the ceiling along with the stars. I bet you are a great mom. If this is for the time of day contest, you have a winner, dear. Love, Carolyn
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October 7, 2011 at 1:37 PM
well debbie you have written a great piece here. leaves a good taste in my mind of the country P.D.
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Thank you for making me feel at home. Tony
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