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A duck is a duck. You can call it a swan if you want to but it won't change anything.  Never try to be something you're not. If you do that you won't please anybody, least of all yourself.

TO THINE OWN SELF BE TRUE.

If I could turn back time I think I'd change a thing or two. I have some mem'ries that are fond, but other things I rue. I enjoyed my time alone as through the wood I scampered, Dogs at heel o'er hill and dale and by the shore unhampered. Nature girl, I guess it's true that title stuck to me. I didn't care, with hay in hair swam creeks and climbed in trees. I loved my freedom, hated school and with my dogs I ran, Often rode my cousin's mule, live wild and free my plan. Then one day I met a man who'd change my life forever. He took me home and married me and from my life he severed, Many things that I held dear, he took me to the city. I had to learn his city ways, be lady like and pretty. He tried to make me change my ways and fit into the mold; But I knew if I did that I'd die before I'm old. You've got to learn to change your ways, grow up, my husband said. I cannot be what I am not, I rather would be dead. I dreamed of one day going back, I wanted to go home. The city is no place for me, no fields for me to roam. You can take me from the country, from the hills and fields and trees; But one thing you must remember, you can't take it out of me.

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Date: 9/19/2021 9:12:00 AM
My choice of a place to live would be a cottage by the sea. I adore the sound of crashing waves, my lungs taking the fresh sea air and walking barefoot on the sand as the waves lap at your ankles. I could also live in the actual bush veld as my husband has shown me the beauty of the wild in South Africa. City, maybe, as I love shopping and the vibe and buzz. Adaptable I guess. However country life and bush veld are closely related! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/20/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/18/2021 6:52:00 AM
WoW! Judy, I am a city girl, but I think I would have loved country life. My father is from the country ( he brought country ways to the city). But he never took me there, nor did he go back himself. I agree with the moral of your story, don't try to be something you're not, be yourself. Did you ever get a chance to go back to the country? I really enjoyed this:-) Alexis
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/18/2021 11:40:00 AM
Yes indeed you would love the country. Something must have happened to hurt your dad in some way to make him leave. He should have stuck to country life maybe in a different area. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/17/2021 4:41:00 AM
A deep write, Judy... I loved the line" But one thing you must remember, you can't take it out of me". How true!!! We are what we are and nothing can change us...
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/18/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Supraja. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/15/2021 11:45:00 PM
Can relate to this wonderful gem of a poem, Judy, Been there and done that.
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/18/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
You offer very sound advice, Judy! I too grew up in the country, and enjoyed many lovely years on my grandfather's farm...how could I ever throw that away in exchange for urban life!! ~ Regards & blessings // paul
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/16/2021 6:59:00 AM
Don't know my friend. I was dragged here by my new husband against my will. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/15/2021 4:11:00 AM
Yes, we are a product of our environment. Sometimes though a person lives in the country and hates every minute of being there and longs for the city life. I enjoyed reading this one today. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/15/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara. I know some country people want to move to the city but after they have been there awhile most return to country life. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/14/2021 5:00:00 PM
Hello Judy ... I absolutely loved this poem. It has what so many yearn. To never leave home in your mind - thank you Judy - Lindsay
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/15/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindsay. Never liked living surrounded by pavement, people and poison. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/14/2021 1:47:00 PM
i hope you get to go back there, dear. I grew up in Iowa and would not mind going back even though I am now accustomed to Utah's dry heat.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2021 5:07:00 PM
oh I am in suburbs!! once in a while we get nosy neighbors like that!!
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/14/2021 2:15:00 PM
At least you aren't stuck in the suburbs where your neighbors try to know everything you are doing. They even tried to tell us how high to build our back yard fence. Said to only build it 5 ft. high so they could see over it. It's 6 ft. high. So there. Thanks bunches Andrea. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/13/2021 10:14:00 PM
I can understand your feelings. Once grown in the country, you will never adjust to city life easily. Wonderful poem. Hugs
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/14/2021 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. I still dream of returning t9o the country. Even though I will be 74 next month I still hate city life. God Bless, JB

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