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Country Fair Excitement

country fairs
carnival fun rides
side show tents
show your skill
tilted wheels, shabby prizes
win your girl a bear

country fairs
high expectations
exhibits
blue ribbons
congratulations winners
losers try next year

By: Joyce Johnson
For contest "Share A Shardoma"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/21/2011 11:11:00 PM
That time for country fairs is just around the corner again. Your poem brings back the fun memories of those times when pleasures were so much simpler.
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:58:00 PM
Most of the folks have focused on the rides and side shows, but you introduced a new element -- the exhibits where people hope to win ribons. Well done, Joyce! Winning wishes for you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2011 1:40:00 AM
Nicely written my friend. Good luc k. Should be a winner./ God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/17/2011 6:43:00 PM
u captured every aspect and more Joyce.. great entry ..good luck my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:46:00 PM
yep try again and again while I sap your dough!!
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
A great write Joyce, I enjoyed the read. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl
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