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Country Diner

I hang a left, my clunker rocking on sprung shocks. Inside, narrows taper to booths. The talk is griddle speech, a blow by blow banter, middle finger smarts mixed with vowels of tenderness. I overhear the history of generations of icons. False gods named, Tod, Ricky, and Wayne vicariously share the bruised chatter - ankle-swelling narrations that break apart unfulfilled. The food arrives with a woman. Dimples nap in work-weary cheeks. Her necklace is ink, yet it hangs over my senses like a caress. She knows I’ve been listening, the waitress smiles, continues unabashed a colloquy with my eyes, recites by rote her 'tip-me-big' love spell.

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Date: 1/2/2020 4:11:00 AM
I know that you have been to many country diners, or one that really resonated! I believe I have been to the same one, where the locals get waited on first!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/2/2020 8:50:00 AM
Yes, probably one very similar. Thanks Caren.
Date: 1/1/2020 1:35:00 PM
Hi Darlene Happy New Years Day to you and thanks for dropping by.
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Date: 1/1/2020 12:55:00 PM
Hello Eric Ashford, I miss the country diner. I had nice meals there. I enjoyed the people around me. Laughing, talking. Have a nice day my friend.
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