Country Diner

I hang a left, my clunker rocking
on sprung shocks.
Inside, narrows taper to booths.
The talk is griddle speech,
a blow by blow banter,
middle finger smarts mixed with
vowels of tenderness.
I overhear the history
of generations of icons. False gods named,
Tod, Ricky, and Wayne
vicariously share the bruised chatter -
ankle-swelling narrations
that break apart unfulfilled.
The food arrives with a woman.
Dimples nap in work-weary cheeks.
Her necklace is ink,
yet it hangs over my senses
like a caress.
She knows I’ve been listening,
the waitress smiles, continues unabashed
a colloquy with my eyes,
recites by rote
her 'tip-me-big' love spell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 4:11 AM
I know that you have been to many country diners, or one that really resonated! I believe I have been to the same one, where the locals get waited on first!
Ashford Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Yes, probably one very similar. Thanks Caren.
Ashford Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Hi Darlene Happy New Years Day to you and thanks for dropping by.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Hello Eric Ashford, I miss the country diner. I had nice meals there. I enjoyed the people around me. Laughing, talking. Have a nice day my friend.
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