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Country Pleiades

Crossing the hoedown lines Courteous men tilted hats Country cowgirls in skirts Corsets set on fire Careening to music Crystallography,... stop Calm returns, silent floor. October 17, 2020 Sponsor: Joseph May Pleiades 2 Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2020 2:56:00 PM

The hoedown roundup...C done so well!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/18/2020 6:56:00 PM

Nicely penned.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/18/2020 1:55:00 PM

I chose country music too! I love your words :) God bless you with a win

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/18/2020 2:55:00 PM

I just finished reading your country pleiades, and I love it, winning wishes,

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/18/2020 6:02:00 AM

Good luck in Joseph's contest Pix. - this is a brilliant Pleiades. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/18/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, I'm honored that you like it, have a great day dear poet.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/17/2020 6:32:00 PM

An excellent write, Pixie!! Good Luck in the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/18/2020 2:55:00 PM

Thank you dear poet for reading and commenting.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/17/2020 1:09:00 PM

So well constructed pleiad. Best for a win. ~~

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/17/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Victor for your comment, it means alot

Silent One

Date: 10/17/2020 11:56:00 AM

Love it... Especially the last line. You did this so well.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/17/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Silent One for taking the time to read it,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/17/2020 10:26:00 AM

Your C's shine in country my friend. All the best, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/17/2020 5:38:00 PM

Thank you Vijay for reading Have a great night