Counting His Puny Fortune

The coins clinked in front of him, then clanked
  the same coins that, as a child, had delighted him
Today merely clinked; today merely clanked
  the joy drained from counting his puny fortune...

Sensing an epiphany, he brushed the coins away
  sat there, chin resting on his elbows, elbows on the table
startled aware, suddenness sweat-laden, that no longer
  was the world content to wait for him to blossom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Theraven Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:02 PM
Gershon, World in motion, trust in fortune's luck. Some cost a mint, some one thousand and one times free. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:27 PM
The more I'm for tuna, the luckier I get! lol. :) gw
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:05 PM
Fine writing, Gershon. Lots of truth in this here poem!
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:28 PM
So appreciated, Milt. Thanks for 'getting' it. Take good care, Gershon
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