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Counting His Puny Fortune

The coins clinked in front of him, then clanked the same coins that, as a child, had delighted him Today merely clinked; today merely clanked the joy drained from counting his puny fortune... Sensing an epiphany, he brushed the coins away sat there, chin resting on his elbows, elbows on the table startled aware, suddenness sweat-laden, that no longer was the world content to wait for him to blossom

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Date: 5/10/2021 10:02:00 PM
Gershon, World in motion, trust in fortune's luck. Some cost a mint, some one thousand and one times free. -Richard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/11/2021 6:27:00 PM
The more I'm for tuna, the luckier I get! lol. :) gw
Date: 5/10/2021 8:05:00 PM
Fine writing, Gershon. Lots of truth in this here poem!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/11/2021 6:28:00 PM
So appreciated, Milt. Thanks for 'getting' it. Take good care, Gershon

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