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Count Dracula

as midnight strikes
Count Dracula
sweeps across the floor
his piercing onyx eyes
locked on his prey
executes with artful grace
his macabre dance seduction

in one captivating swoop
charming the panting victim
she offers it up
as he sinks his teeth
siphoning  from the porcelain neck
her ruby essence



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcguire Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:52 PM
"and syphons her ruby essence" THAT sent a chill down my back! A fav for me! Well done
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 5:41 AM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.
Schaefer Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Good old Vlad the Impaler--still inspiring us minions centuries later.
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Yes isn't it amazing to have such ongoing impact on generations of imagination.
Wolf Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM
You can count on this vampire; that's for sure! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 6:42 PM
There's always something charmingly reliable about a vampire, Gershon.
Papyrus Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 2:18 PM
You see the beauty and evil in it...making it so intriguing. I'll be up tonight looking for porcelain lol
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Now that's a plan. Way to go, Vegter.
One Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:25 AM
i think you described him very well..
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thanks, SO. Most appreciated.
Perrin Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Oh I really like this! :-) x
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thanks, Elaine. Getting into the Halloween mood.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Yes.. it is intriguing. A great write. Bless you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated.
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 11:58 PM
Line, I loved this intriguing, well written poem, full of delightful imagery! :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 12:02 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Evelyn.
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