Council Girl Waster

Knocking on the door, can your mate come out to play?, 
or is she grounded for yet another sunny day?.
Meeting up with your mates, hanging around the park, 
getting up to no good, until way after dark.

Listening to music, all night party's, having a dance, 
Fitti over there giving me a glance.
he was 16, i weren't a teenager yet, 
oh yes my dad would hate him, you can bet on that.

Then me mum mug's me off, 'Max get down the shop'
'all this mucking around girl, it's gonna blimmin' stop!'
Shut away in my room, put on me headphones,
bit of Shalamar? maybe some Stones?.

Sharing a bedroom with 3 boys was proper manic, 
everything of mine broken, me mum in a panic.
Tower block by the Thames, 2 bedroom flat, 
not enough room to swing a skinny cat.

Dad was a car crusher, worked every hour god sent,
put food on the table, no money was ever lent.
mum was too proud, to sign on the dole,
working class family, full of heart and plenty of soul.

School was fun, all me mates were there,
but instead of learning, I would just sit and stare.
Dolly daydreamer by name, scatty ann by nature, 
destined to be nothing but a council girl waster.


Just a little look into my life as a child growing up on a council estate in South London x
Maxine xx
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 31, 2015 at 4:35 AM
MAXINE , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 2:22 AM
Yet another awesome write Max. Am so glad I got you onto the poetry soup diet - I knew it would suit you! Hugs Jan xxxxxx
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Awww thanks Jan, Im soooo loving it :) If I make a million, I'll treat ya ;) lol Maxine xxx
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March 18, 2014 at 5:32 PM
My God, first of all, I am in love with your name "Maxine" That is such a spectacular and rare name. Next I am in love with they way you write. You have awesome prose. I can tell your from the South of London because instead of saying "my mom" you say, "me mum" I love it. That whole British slang as I call it! I love this poem Maxine! It flows, I hear thunder from your words. Awesome write! Also I am a big fan of Great Britain, some of the best poets came from there. Have a great day! xoxo :) :)
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Wow Chris, thank you so much for your lovely comment, I'm very new to this and so happy you have enjoyed this poem :) Have a wonderful day Chris, as we say in London, 'be lucky mate' ;) Maxine xx
Smith Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thanks for giving us a peek at growing up in south London. The rhyming is perfect....Hugs Tim
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Tim, Really enjoying getting my memories down, :) Maxine xx
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