Could Have Been

Smoke pouring of my fountain pen 
Running along my cold fingers
Thoughts just filling up my head
Things I should just tell her

Something’s in the sky for you
A cloud more or less
It seems I just can’t move 
Tangled up in Love’s nets

The town is running like Laughter
Just like it did in the past
White Farmers totally tattered
And dogs run totally free and fast

Never again will we see a face
Of a man totally run down
By love , life and anger’s trace
Like a Dog lost in a Pound

Even the Blues man can Agree
Life is really not over yet
He is better than I can be
The one thing I truly Regret
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 10, 2008 at 5:02 PM
I love the line in this write, that reads by love and anger's trace, like a dog lost in a pound, this is a great and heart filled write, welcome to the soup, if you comment on other's write they will comment on yours, take care D-nyce
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