Cougar and Cub

There once was this gal – much older
And I being young but bolder
Took hold of her hand
Said I am your man
But she gave me the old cold shoulder

Now I – being not a quitter
Thought how am I going to get her
I must make her mine
The very next time
My parents get a baby sitter

Written - 	6/19/11 by mdailey
For Dr. Mehta's contest - Cougar Effect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Delightful Limerick Mike, beautifully written. Good luck in the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 11:46 PM
ahhh, so cute, mike. I am enjoying your poetry here at Soup! (one of the best limericks i have seen for this contest!)
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Adoration of baby sitter, so much love, her eyes don't glitter, with eternal love, she's in charge, don't be bitter, I have worshipped her the sitter, Unrequited love... good one mate, Don
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June 19, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Aw, this is so cute, Mike. WhenI was a teen babysitting, I really enjoyed the little boys' company. This is very clever and sure to please Dr. Ram. Jack and I are judging our contest blindly, so we don't know who wrote which poem. I can say that we have received some great entries and only a few with misspellings. Wishing you success in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:06 AM
very creative and well written piece, good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Father's Day Wish. My dad was 66 when he died, i was 27 when he died. I am 67 going on 68 now. i grew up without him, and started to get to know him around 18, but did not see him the last 6 months of his life, thank you again for taking time to read my poem.
Dailey Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:56 AM
My dad was about 34 when he died - I was barely three. I never knew the man. This October marks the 60th anniversary since his passing.
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June 19, 2011 at 9:20 AM
wow! the old cold shoulder.... somebody worn the baby sitter.... good luck with the awesome clawing image.... enjoy today,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Thanks for the entry, mike
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