Cottage Garden

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vivid pink sweet peas sensuous fragrance lingers sun peeps through grey clouds 10/15/20

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2020 5:29:00 PM

I can smell and see the beauty of it all Dear Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2020 1:47:00 AM

thanks Charma, you were the one to encourage me to send a few of my haiku to the journal and get them published:-) hope all is well with you sweet lady:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2020 1:14:00 PM

Very lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2020 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/18/2020 10:08:00 AM

Sweet peas - unfortunately we have frost and sometimes black frost in Winter so although I would love to have them in my garden, we avoid it. A beauatful Haiku my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2020 10:14:00 AM

Thanks Jennifer i wasn't sure if people were familiar with them:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/17/2020 2:54:00 PM

The only sweet pea around here right now is me. LOL. Great one Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/17/2020 3:14:00 PM

lol thanks Mark :-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/16/2020 2:47:00 PM

Hi Jan, I enjoyed your beautiful haiku, hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2020 2:51:00 PM

thanks Joseph so good to see you my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/16/2020 1:33:00 PM

I love pink flowers on grey days - I can even smell them :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2020 1:49:00 PM

I was give a bunch of sweet peas by my next door but 2 neighbor, i put them in a vase that belonged to my late mother in law (it was the only thing I was permitted to take from the house before it was sold!) hugs jan xx