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Costume Jewels

Queen smiles, watching court jesters
parade in costume jewels
upon revolving stage
living delusions

~*~

Note:  For John Freeman's "Dodiostu" Humor Contest

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 6/21/2013 1:32:00 PM lol, yes, I can picture this scene : ) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/18/2011 1:11:00 PM Visually wonderful, and delightful to read Annalise. When one sees a poem of this class on the podium, you just know the writer and the judge has taste....:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/17/2011 7:55:00 PM Congratulations, Annalise, on your fine dodoitsu. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/17/2011 4:22:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Eiken Laan Date: 1/17/2011 2:03:00 PM wonderful Annalise, congrats on your win also. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/17/2011 12:23:00 PM Congrats on your win my dear... well done and written...always Michael Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 1/17/2011 11:08:00 AM Hello Annalise, Congratulations on your win, very well done I love this one. As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 1/17/2011 10:57:00 AM lovely one , congrats on your win Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/17/2011 8:45:00 AM Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Annalise, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/17/2011 4:50:00 AM Hello Annalise . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. . Eamon Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/16/2011 9:00:00 PM Good work Analise. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/16/2011 5:56:00 PM Congrats Annalise on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/16/2011 5:55:00 PM anna, well-done!! radiant in all ways! thumbs up andcheers for the win! : ) nette Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/16/2011 3:36:00 PM Congratulations Annalise on your worthy poem's worthy 4th place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/16/2011 3:18:00 PM So glad to see you in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/16/2011 3:11:00 PM Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Annalise Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/15/2011 11:29:00 AM Annalise, thanks so much for your conscious support of my Contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/14/2011 5:58:00 AM This is a true gem you have posted here, Annalise! Wish you best of luck for John's contest and thank you for your kind comments!..All the best and take care!...Gert Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/13/2011 6:28:00 PM Excellent imagery, so funny, good luck with this wonderful Dodoitsu. Harry Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/13/2011 12:48:00 PM Awesome creation Annalise and a wonderful entry for John's contest.. good luck.. I simply luv this form and u have created a gem luv.. good luck... Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 1/13/2011 9:54:00 AM Wonderful write, good luck in the contest with this beauty. I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/13/2011 4:20:00 AM Stunning Annalise, if they chuck me out of the office it is your fault.. Brilliant write for John's contest.. love Wilma Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 1/12/2011 11:41:00 PM This is such a funny image, Annalise but I bet the jesters were having more fun than the queen. Good luck in John's contest. Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2011 8:20:00 PM First I chuckled, then I laughed and now I can't stop! The more I picture this scene, the funnier it is. And I love the political statement behind this. It just sneaks up and bites you in the butt. Awesome entry for John's contest, dear. Definitely a winner -- he's a clever guy and I know he's going to see the politics behind this. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/12/2011 7:19:00 PM Smile ~ My third reading upon "This Colourfully Pleasant 'Picturesque Painting,'" made myself laugh aloud; again, "So Bright In, 'A Beautiful Heart of Light!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing spendidly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Dear Annalise,' Amid The Ever Twirling & 'Sparkling Colours of, Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams My Dear;" Bye!:) ~ Login to Reply

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