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Costume Jewels

Queen smiles, watching court jesters
parade in costume jewels
upon revolving stage
living delusions

~*~

Note:  For John Freeman's "Dodiostu" Humor Contest

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Jack Horne

June 21, 2013 at 1:32 PM

lol, yes, I can picture this scene : )

James Fraser

January 18, 2011 at 1:11 PM

Visually wonderful, and delightful to read Annalise. When one sees a poem of this class on the podium, you just know the writer and the judge has taste....:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:55 PM

Congratulations, Annalise, on your fine dodoitsu. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:22 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 2:03 PM

wonderful Annalise, congrats on your win also.

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 12:23 PM

Congrats on your win my dear... well done and written...always Michael

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 11:08 AM

Hello Annalise, Congratulations on your win, very well done I love this one. As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:57 AM

lovely one , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Annalise, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 4:50 AM

Hello Annalise . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. . Eamon

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 9:00 PM

Good work Analise. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 5:56 PM

Congrats Annalise on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2011 at 5:55 PM

anna, well-done!! radiant in all ways! thumbs up andcheers for the win! : ) nette

John Freeman

January 16, 2011 at 3:36 PM

Congratulations Annalise on your worthy poem's worthy 4th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 3:18 PM

So glad to see you in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 16, 2011 at 3:11 PM

Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Annalise

John Freeman

January 15, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Annalise, thanks so much for your conscious support of my Contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

January 14, 2011 at 5:58 AM

This is a true gem you have posted here, Annalise! Wish you best of luck for John's contest and thank you for your kind comments!..All the best and take care!...Gert

Harry Horsman

January 13, 2011 at 6:28 PM

Excellent imagery, so funny, good luck with this wonderful Dodoitsu. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 13, 2011 at 12:48 PM

Awesome creation Annalise and a wonderful entry for John's contest.. good luck.. I simply luv this form and u have created a gem luv.. good luck...

Caryl Muzzey

January 13, 2011 at 9:54 AM

Wonderful write, good luck in the contest with this beauty. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Wilma Neels

January 13, 2011 at 4:20 AM

Stunning Annalise, if they chuck me out of the office it is your fault.. Brilliant write for John's contest.. love Wilma

Diane Locksley

January 12, 2011 at 11:41 PM

This is such a funny image, Annalise but I bet the jesters were having more fun than the queen. Good luck in John's contest. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

January 12, 2011 at 8:20 PM

First I chuckled, then I laughed and now I can't stop! The more I picture this scene, the funnier it is. And I love the political statement behind this. It just sneaks up and bites you in the butt. Awesome entry for John's contest, dear. Definitely a winner -- he's a clever guy and I know he's going to see the politics behind this. Love, Carolyn

John Rhinem

January 12, 2011 at 7:19 PM

Smile ~ My third reading upon "This Colourfully Pleasant 'Picturesque Painting,'" made myself laugh aloud; again, "So Bright In, 'A Beautiful Heart of Light!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing spendidly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Dear Annalise,' Amid The Ever Twirling & 'Sparkling Colours of, Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams My Dear;" Bye!:) ~

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