Cosmically Deep

COSMICALLY DEEP

Did the garden weep
With the ungrateful sweep
Of their covetous hands? Deep
Was the pit of their pickpocket. Sleep
Thought merciful and kind, allowed not a peep
From their rosy lips, where sweet cheeks steep.*
A father took enough of a long leap,
Where the shepherd would tend to his lost sheep,
Absolve them - not harvest to reap
What they sow. Tis too late to stop the creep
Of the garden snake and certainly not cheap —
The stomp of its horny-head, the splintered son in a heap.
Sentient of mankind’s plight, the Son of Man did weep
as his children root in garden beds; and choose to keep
the Adams and Eves, whose restoration, was not dirt cheap.
Behold the Lamb of God did not oversleep!
The earthquake and lightning cosmically deep —
The thunder roll of an angel veep.
He sat upon the lightweight bolder. The like dead men sleep.
As in joyous weep,
Mary Magdalene and the other Mary, reap
First, the benefits of glory, not cheap.
As they did run and leap
The Lord met them along the way. They’d keep
His secret, until they’d shake his disciples wide awake from sleep.

5/13/2020

*Here I attempt to paint a picture of a mischievous child
who when fast asleep, a mother sighs, remembering her
love for him (her) once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/16/2020 6:39:00 AM
Your monorhyme made me smile this morning and before my coffee!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :)
Date: 5/14/2020 10:53:00 AM
Nicely done my friend. I can't do this type. I'm impressed again. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 10:44:00 PM
You are so kind! I try to challenge myself every once in a while! <3 Kim
Date: 5/14/2020 1:41:00 AM
I am clapping my hands in wild abandon to the joy of your monorhyme my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I can see it! Blessings!
Date: 5/14/2020 12:27:00 AM
The Garden of Gethsemane - Christ was taken to be judged and hurt, his whip lashed bloodied back bled his eyes misty from blood pouring from his crown of thorns into his eyes yet he still forgives the sinners. Mary and Mary watched and cried as he hung on the cross, a mother worst nightmare, to see her son suffering - On the third dayafter his resurrection, he reveals himself to Mary Magdalene - I love this write. I have faved it. Our Lord died to save us all. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer! God bless you!
Date: 5/13/2020 5:50:00 PM
Kim, I just loved your monorhyme as it carries us from the garden to the resurrection. So creative, and so reminiscent of God's grace to sinners. Wonderfully penned! ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, John!
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