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I saw the moon this morning as it trailed away the night. Several planets chasing it made quite a wondrous sight; Venus was her usual self, so bright she stole the show, While Jupiter was impressing with his brightly shining glow. Trailing with the group was a ruby-sparkling Mars and Mercury was shining brighter than the other stars. You have to get up early, and look out to the East, to fill your head with wonder and enjoy this cosmic feast.

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Date: 5/29/2018 9:19:00 AM
Lovely little verse here! I enjoy looking up at the wonders of the sky, our universe. <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 5/29/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Laura! I do, too, and have a few more like this to post; stay tuned. Thank you for taking a moment to share your thoughts; I appreciate you stopping by. -Cary

Book: Shattered Sighs