Cosmic, Enigmatic

Seemingly some kind of Message to

All and sundry about:

The colossal crimson sun imperceptibly sinks over the horizon,

Sinks beyond the road here, over the park in the

Debilitating, gritty summer heat.

Nearby, a huge silent hairy golden dragonfly,

As large as a fully grown man's hand, 

Unexpectedly swings down from above.

The dragonfly hovers for a moment,

Then effortlessly, closely paces a car suddenly passing by,

One filled with aching sore-tired workmen.

They are oblivious to 

The mute insect "spy" outside the car's windows,

Just as they are now oblivious to all:

Exhausted, the men have done their workaday work well.

Then just as suddenly as the dragonfly first appeared,

It shoots straight upward,

Disappearing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Onderisin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 4:16 AM
thank you for your kind feedback, Funom. i'm proud and glad that you enjoyed the poem. commentary such as yours certainly is a joy for me. best wishes, peace, gary
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:55 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:31 PM
This piece speaks, no sings to me. 7
Onderisin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 4:33 AM
thanks again, Maureen. i've loved poetry all my life, and, as i above tried to impart to Funom, kind words such as yours make me proud and grateful. peace, gary
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