Connie Marcum Wong Poet Verse

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Cosmic Creations

Cosmic Creations

Cosmic colors divinely dances,
Notes whimsically whirling surreal song,
Glowing gems in free flight rhythm,
Spirally synced collective consciousness,
Cosmic cluster’s blissful birth
Emanates energy to sage souls,
Resonates with heaven’s harmony.

November 5, 2021

Sequence #2:

1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables

Alliterisen - 7 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor Joseph May

The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. 

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Unseeking Seeker January 10, 2022 at 8:21 PM Oh, wow! An amazing write, which should do well in the contest.

Valsa George January 9, 2022 at 11:57 PM This is truly poetry through striking images ! Beautiful Connie ! Love this !

Joseph P. DiMino December 16, 2021 at 6:36 AM Great imagery, Connie; lots of depth and mystical wisdom. A true warrior for mental and spiritual freedom. Love it! Joe. Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 10:43 PM Thank you very much my friend. All my cards are sent and all my gifts given. Now I can enjoy some poetry. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2021 at 4:24 PM back to say thanks for your comment on my poem and leaving the info about people protesting for their freedoms. I pray to God that freedom will ring and people will unplug their ears to hear it. Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 10:45 PM Me too Andrea. You are very welcome. Have a most blessed Christmas my friend. Hugs Connie xxoo

Susan Ashley December 9, 2021 at 11:04 AM Dear Connie, poetic magic spills from your enchanted pen. Every line of exquisite imagery a gem in your beautiful cosmic creation. You're such a gifted poetess. I especially loved; "Spirally synced collective consciousness" - something to aspire to.. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 10:47 PM You give me far too much credit Susan. I am humbled by your generous comment. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I wish you a most blessed Christmas my friend. xxoo

Panagiota Romios December 6, 2021 at 12:26 PM Congratulaions, Connie. Awesome. Panagiota

Robert Lindley December 5, 2021 at 12:37 PM Such wonderful imagery and creativity in this new poetry form my dear friend! A fav--and a true gem too. God bless..

Jennifer Proxenos December 5, 2021 at 7:40 AM How could this gem not win, well done Connie,. Superb poetry and very creative, hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie December 2, 2021 at 6:54 PM Hello Connie ... you have certainly created a lovely verse in a genre many of us would find difficult - thanks again Connie - Lindsay

Harry Horsman December 2, 2021 at 6:26 PM Wow, Love this Connie, a well deserved winner.

Panagiota Romios December 1, 2021 at 3:18 AM Congratulations, Connie. A lovely wtite Panahiota 12/1/ 2021

Eve Roper November 30, 2021 at 1:50 PM Great imagery and verse, Lovely lady. Prayers are always with you and your family. Hugs dear friend

Constance La France November 30, 2021 at 9:42 AM Connie, magical poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 5:23 PM Very nicely done, Connie. Congrats on your winning poem. I know you haven't had it so easy of late...happy to see you still writing. Sending love, prayers & blessings...Charlie

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2021 at 3:53 PM Congrats in the contest with this lovely gem, dear Connie

Joseph P. DiMino November 29, 2021 at 12:07 PM Beautiful alliteration and imagery. A lesson here also, one to be silent and observe. Overlooking the importance is silence, is depriving one's spirit of its greater universe. Great read, Connie. Thank you.

Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 10:51 AM Congrats on your fine write and win, Connie.

Joseph May November 29, 2021 at 7:03 AM "Glowing gems in free flight rhythm", Great write Connie, Congrats on your win

Heidi Sands November 27, 2021 at 1:43 PM Wow Connie. Amazing poem. Well written :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury November 26, 2021 at 5:44 AM Dear Connie, this is stunning! The form is quite challenging to me - you have portrayed an absolutely amazing picture of cosmos creations with great alliteration and flow. Warm wishes ~ Mala Connie Marcum Wong November 28, 2021 at 1:32 AM Thank you Mala. It was challenging. Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick November 26, 2021 at 5:15 AM Creative and probably very difficult to write. Reads like a good contender for Joseph's contest. Sara

Judy Ball November 23, 2021 at 4:07 AM Absolutely beautiful just like the perfectly fitting picture. Love it. God Bless, JB

Joanna Daniel November 22, 2021 at 10:23 PM Amazing rhythm and beauty in this one, Connie:) hope you are doing well:)

Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 3:32 PM you've written the perfect piece for the contest with wonderful flow and alliteration, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Paghunda Zahid November 18, 2021 at 6:46 AM Sounds great. Good luck in the contest

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