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Cosmic Creations

Cosmic colors divinely dances,
Notes whimsically whirling surreal song,
Glowing gems in free flight rhythm,
Spirally synced collective consciousness,
Cosmic cluster’s blissful birth
Emanates energy to sage souls,
Resonates with heaven’s harmony.

November 5, 2021

Sequence #2:

1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables

Alliterisen - 7 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor Joseph May

The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. 

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/10/2022 8:21:00 PM

Oh, wow! An amazing write, which should do well in the contest.

Valsa George

Date: 1/9/2022 11:57:00 PM

This is truly poetry through striking images ! Beautiful Connie ! Love this !

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/16/2021 6:36:00 AM

Great imagery, Connie; lots of depth and mystical wisdom. A true warrior for mental and spiritual freedom. Love it! Joe.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/19/2021 10:43:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend. All my cards are sent and all my gifts given. Now I can enjoy some poetry. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 4:24:00 PM

back to say thanks for your comment on my poem and leaving the info about people protesting for their freedoms. I pray to God that freedom will ring and people will unplug their ears to hear it.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/19/2021 10:45:00 PM

Me too Andrea. You are very welcome. Have a most blessed Christmas my friend. Hugs Connie xxoo

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2021 11:04:00 AM

Dear Connie, poetic magic spills from your enchanted pen. Every line of exquisite imagery a gem in your beautiful cosmic creation. You're such a gifted poetess. I especially loved; "Spirally synced collective consciousness" - something to aspire to.. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/19/2021 10:47:00 PM

You give me far too much credit Susan. I am humbled by your generous comment. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I wish you a most blessed Christmas my friend. xxoo

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/6/2021 12:26:00 PM

Congratulaions, Connie. Awesome. Panagiota

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/5/2021 12:37:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery and creativity in this new poetry form my dear friend! A fav--and a true gem too. God bless..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/5/2021 7:40:00 AM

How could this gem not win, well done Connie,. Superb poetry and very creative, hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/2/2021 6:54:00 PM

Hello Connie ... you have certainly created a lovely verse in a genre many of us would find difficult - thanks again Connie - Lindsay

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/2/2021 6:26:00 PM

Wow, Love this Connie, a well deserved winner.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/1/2021 3:18:00 AM

Congratulations, Connie. A lovely wtite Panahiota 12/1/ 2021

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2021 1:50:00 PM

Great imagery and verse, Lovely lady. Prayers are always with you and your family. Hugs dear friend

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:42:00 AM

Connie, magical poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 11/29/2021 5:23:00 PM

Very nicely done, Connie. Congrats on your winning poem. I know you haven't had it so easy of late...happy to see you still writing. Sending love, prayers & blessings...Charlie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2021 3:53:00 PM

Congrats in the contest with this lovely gem, dear Connie

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/29/2021 12:07:00 PM

Beautiful alliteration and imagery. A lesson here also, one to be silent and observe. Overlooking the importance is silence, is depriving one's spirit of its greater universe. Great read, Connie. Thank you.

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:51:00 AM

Congrats on your fine write and win, Connie.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 7:03:00 AM

"Glowing gems in free flight rhythm", Great write Connie, Congrats on your win

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/27/2021 1:43:00 PM

Wow Connie. Amazing poem. Well written :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/26/2021 5:44:00 AM

Dear Connie, this is stunning! The form is quite challenging to me - you have portrayed an absolutely amazing picture of cosmos creations with great alliteration and flow. Warm wishes ~ Mala

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/28/2021 1:32:00 AM

Thank you Mala. It was challenging. Blessings xxoo