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Corridor

Corridor I saw her in the corridor She was easy to adore My heart dropped as my eyes explored I wanted to know her more She disappeared behind the door I thought I would see her no more next day she looked There in the corridor she explored saying I have never seen you before I stuttered and muttered I told her I normally use the other door Glad to meet my name is May I am Sam the love story began

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Date: 5/20/2017 12:44:00 PM
This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 5/20/2017 2:45:00 PM
Hi Funom , thanks for comment much appreciated :)) hugs from Ireland
Date: 5/20/2017 5:17:00 AM
aw this is a cute little love story poem :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 5/20/2017 8:24:00 AM
Hi Becca , I always write about something I see or do, I just hope that girl in the corridor is not on poetrysoup ,,,lol:)) hugs

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