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A Corner Window

When Mamá grabbed the broom as my brother and I fought, we'd head into the bedroom and fighting came to naught. Mom and Pop were foreigners always looking for more work. We were sent to our corners for acting like a jerk. We each had a small table; we had two crates for chairs. It was our homework stable and we stored "our" toys there. A window in each corner, was the very best part "Una ventana de esquina" One faced a shopping mart. The other window faced a playground and the street There it was fun to trace the kids we'd chanced to meet. I can hear Mamá's call "Limpiar, niños", don't grouse spring...summer...winter...fall... It's time to clean the house. It's time to get re-cornered, new windows change our view. Mamá's broom now labored in work it was made to do. revised March 28, 2017

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Date: 3/28/2017 7:10:00 PM
Very nice nostalgic write Reason! Enjoyed~Che :)
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Date: 3/27/2017 10:07:00 AM
Great narrative, Reason:)
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Date: 3/28/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. Glad for the read.
Date: 3/26/2017 4:36:00 PM
this is SO cool, REason. Glad I got to see YOUR corner poem for today!!! for some reason I was thinking you were female, but if this poem is taken for your own truth, you were a boy!!
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Date: 3/26/2017 5:32:00 PM
Grew up with a brother, raised two boys and am helping raise two grandsons -- I think and talk boy language; but no I am really a female, always have been, always will be. In this day and age, you almost can't tell. The story however, is true for other boys who live in a crowded city.

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