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Core Attributes

Which came first The goddess or the blame Eve of destruction Lilith playing a game ***

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 3/8/2023 6:10:00 PM

You are my favorite kind of biblical surprise! Loved the rhyme and the intentionalness of the write! Warm fuzzys A.S.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/9/2023 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Scorpio! Not only did I forget that I wrote this, I forgot that I could. I have a brain injury, I can forget myself. BTW, for a spell, prompted by the abortion law’s passing in the US used the moniker The Insolent Rib, until I was asked for a poem to be used by Litfest in the UK, changed it back :))) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 5/4/2021 1:09:00 PM

Maureen, brilliant as always. Lilith is THEIR distruction from the very beginning; that's why they don't want to admit her existence.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 4/25/2021 4:34:00 PM

Between them a perfect storm . . . : /

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/22/2021 12:53:00 PM

A thought provoking write, super Mo and a beautiful rhyme, I quite like the idea of the two of them, trouble makers, and seductive flames, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2021 5:02:00 PM

Eve's got her own brand of cigarettes; Adam's stuck with his apple.The snake's most uncomfortable in his skin; God's created the funeral chapel. ~ Phil Collins and Genesis