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Cordiform Poem Mesmerizes

catches
                                       our                      

                            rapid                                     
                        
                    desire                                              It
 
             impresses

       forever

   our

 rampant


  motion
   

    penetrates
  
     our 

       emotion

        mesmerizes
      
          the 

             open
   
               understanding

                  captures 

                     human
                   
                        emotion 
                         
                              sustains 
                                 
                                       the 

                                                   soul

Written: 04/10/22
Contest: Brian's
If you write down the first letters except for it  (c through the second m) you get another message.

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Date: 4/13/2022 4:25:00 AM
WoW! Sara, You’ve composed a good shape with a great message. Well done. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2022 10:29:00 AM
Why, thank you, Alexis. I appreciate the nice review. Sara
Date: 4/12/2022 12:42:00 PM
Very nice, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Your visit was impressive. Sara
Date: 4/12/2022 2:20:00 AM
Great shape, Sara, very creative verse. Blessings my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2022 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 1:05:00 PM
Sara, I love the artwork and message very creative. Blessings. Blessings ~ Debra
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2022 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Debra. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 4/10/2022 11:47:00 AM
Hello Sara, a very creative pom. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2022 10:44:00 AM
Hello Sara, I enjoyed it. You are welcome my friend. enjoy your day.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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