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Coquette

well made up as she knew
looking sexy in shredded jeans
dilly dallying round high street
giving the eye to men
who all knew she was not worth it

9th gradefree verse

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Valsa George

April 9, 2022 at 2:01 AM

Small poem, but very suggestive !The portrait of the girl deftly sketched !

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 15, 2021 at 1:46 PM

... we should not judge by appearance ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree

October 12, 2021 at 6:45 PM

I love this Victor. Very descriptive :)

Alexis Y.

October 12, 2021 at 7:20 AM

Hi Victor, You said much in a few words. Great job. Have a great day my, friend:-) Alexis

Ann Gilmour

October 12, 2021 at 4:19 AM

very clever Victor, in just a few words you were very able to make your point so well ~ great read. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arthur Vaso

October 11, 2021 at 9:33 PM

Victor, this is really a tribute to past desires, few words , a great poem!!!!

Kim Rodrigues

October 11, 2021 at 4:29 PM

Cha-ching

Judy Ball

October 11, 2021 at 4:19 PM

Ooohoo! This reminds me of something I heard a man say once. He said he used to think some girls were a certain way until he finally understood that it was usually his own thoughts he was listening to because he couldn't possibly know what she was thinking. This was funny Victor. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2021 at 3:28 PM

haha. Love that last line.

Sotto Poet

October 11, 2021 at 12:17 PM

Thanks for the new perspective, Victor. The importance of being courteous is undeniable, in my opinion. My initial impression of life is that it's very odd. To read it was a pleasure in itself.

Jan Allison

October 11, 2021 at 11:46 AM

very descriptive Victor!:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

October 11, 2021 at 11:01 AM

This poem provides another interesting slice of life, Victor. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day, Evelyn :)

Beryl Edmonds

October 11, 2021 at 9:28 AM

Some girls can’t help but flirt but maybe that’s not a curse, they could do worse. Love the write Victor… Belle

Eve Roper

October 11, 2021 at 8:54 AM

she might be worth it :)

Vijay Pandit

October 11, 2021 at 6:35 AM

No harm in admiring her beauty and smile. She sure charms your poem, Victor.

Sara Kendrick

October 11, 2021 at 4:46 AM

I guess you mean by high street that her price or upkeep would be high and she would not want to do wifely duties. Well, I don't know because I don't go to high street. I have live right down on the border of poverty road but have enjoyed better times now for a number of years but we don't know what the future holds. Thanks for the visit to my page with such a kind review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

October 11, 2021 at 5:59 AM

In Malta high street is th same as main street.

Karen Jones

October 11, 2021 at 3:37 AM

Hmmm was it a dismissive eye? Or a come hither eye? ?? These days could mean a lot more. Still if she is a lost soul just say have a blessed day. I agree with being friendly. My first thought is that she has an alternative life style. Is happy being gay or bisexual. Lol

Victor Buhagiar

October 11, 2021 at 6:03 AM

I never wrote happy in my poem. I would never write about gay or bisexual people. No offence meant of course.

Lisa Ricci

October 11, 2021 at 3:28 AM

Top of the day to you Victor - Well now, what can be said for this other than I will let your words stand... - Have a beautiful afternoon. Blessings always and beware of high street...