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well made up as she knew looking sexy in shredded jeans dilly dallying round high street giving the eye to men who all knew she was not worth it

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Valsa George

Date: 4/9/2022 2:01:00 AM

Small poem, but very suggestive !The portrait of the girl deftly sketched !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2021 1:46:00 PM

... we should not judge by appearance ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/12/2021 6:45:00 PM

I love this Victor. Very descriptive :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/12/2021 7:20:00 AM

Hi Victor, You said much in a few words. Great job. Have a great day my, friend:-) Alexis

Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/12/2021 4:19:00 AM

very clever Victor, in just a few words you were very able to make your point so well ~ great read. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/11/2021 9:33:00 PM

Victor, this is really a tribute to past desires, few words , a great poem!!!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2021 4:29:00 PM

Cha-ching

Judy Ball

Date: 10/11/2021 4:19:00 PM

Ooohoo! This reminds me of something I heard a man say once. He said he used to think some girls were a certain way until he finally understood that it was usually his own thoughts he was listening to because he couldn't possibly know what she was thinking. This was funny Victor. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2021 3:28:00 PM

haha. Love that last line.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/11/2021 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for the new perspective, Victor. The importance of being courteous is undeniable, in my opinion. My initial impression of life is that it's very odd. To read it was a pleasure in itself.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2021 11:46:00 AM

very descriptive Victor!:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/11/2021 11:01:00 AM

This poem provides another interesting slice of life, Victor. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day, Evelyn :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/11/2021 9:28:00 AM

Some girls can’t help but flirt but maybe that’s not a curse, they could do worse. Love the write Victor… Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 10/11/2021 8:54:00 AM

she might be worth it :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/11/2021 6:35:00 AM

No harm in admiring her beauty and smile. She sure charms your poem, Victor.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2021 4:46:00 AM

I guess you mean by high street that her price or upkeep would be high and she would not want to do wifely duties. Well, I don't know because I don't go to high street. I have live right down on the border of poverty road but have enjoyed better times now for a number of years but we don't know what the future holds. Thanks for the visit to my page with such a kind review. Sara

Buhagiar Victor
Date: 10/11/2021 5:59:00 AM

In Malta high street is th same as main street.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/11/2021 3:37:00 AM

Hmmm was it a dismissive eye? Or a come hither eye? ?? These days could mean a lot more. Still if she is a lost soul just say have a blessed day. I agree with being friendly. My first thought is that she has an alternative life style. Is happy being gay or bisexual. Lol

Buhagiar Victor
Date: 10/11/2021 6:03:00 AM

I never wrote happy in my poem. I would never write about gay or bisexual people. No offence meant of course.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/11/2021 3:28:00 AM

Top of the day to you Victor - Well now, what can be said for this other than I will let your words stand... - Have a beautiful afternoon. Blessings always and beware of high street...

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/11/2021 3:12:00 AM

Return her smile anyway, Victor! It costs nothing

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/11/2021 3:09:00 AM

Sounds like she's just out for a good time, definitely one to avoid. Tom