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Conventional I'M Not

My steady eyes observe a jay lodge against the fissure of night To glide at morn, its rebellious cruise as plumy wings reach hills and skies, and orbs: Somehow, I feel each turn of reels identify with every jaunt where snowdrops’ plunge into the tempo of avian trill... a rhapsody or wild dissent; if only to see myself through its audacious grit. My hands wave now and laugh, I shall, For jay’s distinctive mark Reflects my will…this fowl chasing the rays On its own term. Much like the jay, my heart Treads unknown paths… conventional, I'm not. 8/15/2019 For Craig Cornish's Something I Am Not Contest

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Date: 9/22/2019 12:05:00 AM
Nice job on bringing the comparison to life. I can feel the movement.
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Date: 9/5/2019 12:15:00 PM
Nette, for some reason your poem didn't post among the winners - I fixed it - awesome always-hugs
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Date: 8/15/2019 2:05:00 PM
- Meaning from the heart, Nette ... luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2019 9:18:00 AM
Good for you, it makes you far more interesting. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/15/2019 5:34:00 AM
Extremely well written! A groundbreaking poem from a trailblazer. Grateful too for my prize.
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:26:00 PM
The words of a free spirit, who goes beyond borders embracing whatever surprises come your way. Thought provoking nette. Tom
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:09:00 PM
Your pen is always so charming and elegant..verses of eloquence my friend..so well written as always, Nette. Wish you the best for a TOP win in the contest.
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Date: 8/14/2019 3:54:00 PM
This is a great poem Nette. I love the ending too :)
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