Conventional I'M Not

My steady eyes observe a jay
lodge against the fissure of night
To  glide at morn, its rebellious cruise
as plumy wings reach hills and skies, and orbs:
Somehow, I feel each turn of reels
identify with every  jaunt where snowdrops’ plunge
into the tempo of avian trill...
a rhapsody
or wild dissent;
if only to see myself
through its audacious grit.

My hands wave now and laugh, I shall,
For jay’s distinctive mark
Reflects my will…this fowl chasing the rays
On its own term. Much like the jay, my heart
Treads unknown paths… conventional, I'm not.


8/15/2019
For Craig Cornish's Something I Am Not Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ligon Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 12:05 AM
Nice job on bringing the comparison to life. I can feel the movement.
Cornish Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Nette, for some reason your poem didn't post among the winners - I fixed it - awesome always-hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:05 PM
- Meaning from the heart, Nette ... luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 15, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Good for you, it makes you far more interesting. Hugs Rick.
Arana Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 5:34 AM
Extremely well written! A groundbreaking poem from a trailblazer. Grateful too for my prize.
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 4:26 PM
The words of a free spirit, who goes beyond borders embracing whatever surprises come your way. Thought provoking nette. Tom
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Your pen is always so charming and elegant..verses of eloquence my friend..so well written as always, Nette. Wish you the best for a TOP win in the contest.
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 3:54 PM
This is a great poem Nette. I love the ending too :)
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