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Conventional Framework

the mirror split within the look of sight the aptest share was near snags come from prognosticated I see it strew like ice melting yet it was vivid & heart was sobbing from my caught metacarpus where I drove the staring fragment i turned it to attempt & stop the red drippings 1st place contest winner Written: May 10, 2022 NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/7/2022 5:36:00 PM

Frankly, this makes no sense to me whatsoever. I suppose "to each his own" but this is simply not for me.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/7/2022 7:07:00 PM

I respect your opinion, Lasaad, but it is meaningless drivel to me. That's all I'll say at this point. "Organic form" - exactly what do you mean by this? Educate me.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/7/2022 6:39:00 PM

Milt, I respect your opinion, but I think you should try it. It's the most revolutionary poetry style, and it's enjoyable to create. We don't consider the reader's reaction whether writing in rhyme or free poetry; we just convey our sentiments. We intend to keep the reader interested and thinking about a solution in this organic form; for further technical help, you might refer to the poet: Brian Strand. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2022 12:51:00 AM

Congrats on your top win! Very well done!

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/14/2022 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win Lasaad, you really can turn your metacarpus to any poetry form, I’m a bit like Valsa a lot of this form goes over my head, I will leave it to the experts, and your the main man in this field, cheers David

Valsa George

Date: 5/13/2022 8:44:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your top win dear friend ! This esoteric write contains within it gems of thought!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/13/2022 1:40:00 PM

Confessedly challenging, albeit, intriguing, Lasaad, as the verse solidly cascades as you've noted. My compliments on your top win my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George

Date: 5/11/2022 9:01:00 AM

This sounds complicated and too high for my grasp ! My simple brain cannot comprehend it !

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/11/2022 9:09:00 AM

It's not as complicated as you think, Valsa. It's actually like subdividing the poem into shards of metaphors. You mention a part of the image and let the reader grasp and imagine what's behind it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2022 8:25:00 AM

Interesting, my friend, Lasaad but... new to me! Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/11/2022 3:21:00 AM

Personally I prefer punctuations. But to each his own.