Control

So this is all there will be from now on,
since you've made up your mind to depart;
no more TV, no talking, no people, no fun,
no more girlfriends who play with your heart. 

You're a timid and tremulous creature,
always wearing your soul on your sleeve;
you can't for the life of you step on a bug
but you simply don't know how to leave.

How to leave things behind when they're done,
how to let go a friendship that's dead,
not to disinter love when it's all in your mind,
and take charge of your own life instead.

It's all just a question of balance, 
why must you suffer such pain?
just see living as merely good judgment, good sense, 
and you'll get your control back again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lane Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Battles rage on between the mind and the heart...the winner sometimes turns out to be the loser. Very good expressions used in this write, Keith.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Yes, the winner can indeed turn out to be the loser to be sure... Thanks Lin! Best wishes, Keith
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Great topic chosen and good advice..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks Sara... (p.s. it is always a pleasure to visit your page.) Best wishes, Keith
Callaghan Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:51 PM
This really got me - a fantastic piece..
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Fiona! So happy to have you visit today and leave such delightful remarks! Best wishes, Keith
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