Contrails In the Sky

There's not a cloud in the pristine Colorado sky,
But for a myriad of feathery contrails left by airplanes flying high.
I wonder from whence they came and what are their destinations,
As they form arrow-straight patterns of many variations.

They're probably having lunch now, the proverbial pretzels and coke,
The pilot ever alert with steady hands upon the yoke.
What a view that must be from thirty-thousand feet,
Especially for those lucky folks who have a window seat!

What dramas, I muse, are being played out among those aboard.
Some read, others snooze, others keep glazed-eyed seat mates bored!
Harried moms trying to keep their kids from going berserk;
Stressed-out business travelers poring over reams of paper work!

A lonely soldier at a window seat stares dolefully out in to space,
Holding in his heart the memory of his sweetheart's last embrace.
A newly minted grandmother whose face is just a-beaming,
Going to see the new-born babe for whom she has been dreaming!

With clenched white knuckles, tense first-time flyers abound.
A newly-wed pair exchange a kiss, not caring who's around!
The silvery jet speeds upon its way, the contrails dissipate,
With travelers anticipating joyous reunions awaiting them at the gate!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 4:29 PM
I really like the way you describe the different feelings of the passengers. It's always a mixed group on a plane, Bob, and the "reunions" at the gate are always in the minds of people flying. Great poem, my friend! Love, Carolyn
Taylor Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:28 PM
Good write, Bob. Very thought provoking.
Bathsheba Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Lovely write Bob - Enjoyed it a lot - I often think the same thoughts when I see planes in the sky - More often than not though just wishing I was on the god damn plane lol - Thanks for sharing this fab write today -:)
Culverhouse Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:30 AM
enjoyed reading today! thanks for all your comments and support.
A  Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:27 AM
I like the way you describe clenched white knuckles. A good grip of a poem . Is what I find here. irma
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