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Continuum - Part One

Protruding from new fallen rock, where fossil hunters play And casting long its shadow, as the night gives way to day This femur from an ancient beast that walked here long before Perhaps an isolated find… most likely nothing more Experts with assorted tools which dig and scrape and brush Unearth the ancient monster, until one of them yells, “Hush!” Police assail this beach of bones, where many finds are made And cordon off this new reveal - an ancient flint-stone blade Neanderthals once roamed these shores, their relics often found But eons after dinosaurs, which lie in deeper ground Not so strange to make these finds upon this south coast sand But never, in a dinosaur; a dagger wielding hand Tyrannosaurus Rex displays his bones for all to see And in the space where Mr Rex’s gut was meant to be The hand that holds the dagger lies attached to ancient man But this does not concur with evolution’s master plan No ancient man should now be found inside this long dead beast For sure he never can have been tyrannosaur’s last feast Unlikely then, that policemen will cordon off more zones As fossil hunters find more beasts containing human bones Professor Adam Adams is euphoric - in extremes, “Everything we see here is precisely as it seems The dinosaurs all died when rocks from space lit up the skies, But they had long since hunted man… how’s that for a surprise?” The rain was not predicted by the forecast for this day But those few droplets bring a neon glow to the affray Sand that has been smooth and level save for footprints there Begins to bulge and rise, and each man can but stand and stare Is it in the gift of man to comprehend his being Can a modern man refute the truth that he is seeing When bones so dry for epochs grow a scaly flesh anew Might a modern man hope that his God knows what to do? Bones so bare, now rise up there, with skin and muscle forming There’s bound to be some lunatics who’ll say it’s global warming But Adam Adams watches monsters forming on the beach And even he debates an option… which God to beseech? Policemen screech through tannoys telling folk to stay well clear Their voices reach a pitch which tells the crowd they share their fear And as the first Tyrannosaurus rex stands tall and proud Its eyes flick to and fro to choose a victim from the crowd Everywhere upon the sands more dinosaurs arise And each just stands there waiting with those strange expectant eyes Perchance they see a meal in every person on this beach It’s clear they’ve hunted humans - which our text books do not teach But now… there is a fizzing from a rumbling sea that’s hissing Notwithstanding dinosaurs, what is it that I’m missing Waves that crashed upon the beach now crash too far from shore And Adam Adams cries out, “This has all happened before!” Where the waves are breaking in a sea now madly quaking Adam Adams teeters as the beach has started shaking “I see it now,” he shouted, “Evolution isn’t real,” He indicates the sea where there’s a giant disc of… steel? [Thats no exaggeration; let me help you realise that when I call it giant, I don’t mean it’s quite a size I mean that if it stood on legs held in a landing stance At least one would stand on this beach… and at least one in France]
Continued in Part Two

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Date: 12/7/2024 12:55:00 PM
An interesting read Terry. Now you've peeked my interest even more with this giant disc of steel, so onto the next. Big Smiles Anne :-)
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Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 12/7/2024 5:38:00 PM
I completely understand how writing does that. I also started writing a sci fi novel several years ago but it got put on the back burner due to family responsibilities.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/7/2024 4:51:00 PM
Occasionally, usually unintentionally, I come up with these lengthy writes. Reads are few, comments are fewer, but hey, I enjoy the process of getting the story done. It’s rather like writing a novel without consuming a year of your life (I’ve written two novels… believe me… they eat you alive). Thanks for giving this long write the time of day… I hope you don’t decide it was time wasted ;-)
Date: 12/6/2024 2:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading Continuum part one, I’m looking foreword to the rest of the story… Beryl
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/6/2024 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Beryl. Hope you’ll enjoy the whole thing. I look forward to hearing (no commitment though).
Date: 12/5/2024 12:02:00 AM
Love these epics right now my mind is at Durdle Door in Dorset. On to part two. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/6/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Being on the Isle of Wight, the Bone Beach contest plonked my brain on the Jurassic coast. I soon saw this was gonna be a mega write; too mega to inflict on the sponsor, so after a zillion rewrites I ended up with this. Terry
Date: 12/4/2024 1:08:00 PM
what a joy and a privilege to get to read such a story, told in glorious rhyme, by a master storyteller such as yourself, terry! i'm looking forward to reading the rest...
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/4/2024 2:21:00 PM
It’s been a task, this one, Ilene. It’s been off in so many directions that I had to keep rereading to see which was its current direction. Thanks for testing the water. Hope you’ll enjoy the rest. Terry
Date: 12/3/2024 6:43:00 PM
Is this another long bug story? Jus askin before I delve
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/4/2024 8:24:00 AM
Oh… and only (?) three parts
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/3/2024 11:38:00 PM
No bugs in this one, Tom ;-)
Date: 12/3/2024 6:04:00 PM
And then…. Still reading.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/4/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thanks for going for it, Lin. This has been in the wings for weeks. Kept putting it down, picking it up. Almost gave up on it, but I knew I’d keep returning to it. So, I decided to stick at it and get it done. Ultimately, this took shape. Hope you enjoy. Terry

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