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February 17, 2019

Contentment

Sunday morning under my quilted down comforter
Coffee smells loosening tension like a good massage.
My alarm clock snores on, this being its one day off
And I gaze at the dresser replete with family photos.
Contentment fills me, dampening every exposed, jagged nerve
And begins to overflow as my cat purrs her approval.
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La France Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Cindi congratulations on your win
Ashley Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 7:44 PM
It was a pleasure to return and reread your amazing poem, Cindi. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Poteet Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Congratulations, Cindi. Great read. Weekends have their appeal along with any day off from routine work. I like the dampening of your raw nerves. Church times hopefully vary enough to let you worship and put your spirit at ease, also.
Rockwell Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Absolutely! One reason my Sundays are so peaceful is the time I spend in church!
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Nice and cozy!;) congrats on your win!;)
Rockwell Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Awesome tribute to the best day of the week! Bravo for your most deserved win, Cindi.
Fairchild Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations! This is a great feeling! If more people would take the time just to be grateful for this, like you have, we would have a better world!
Ashley Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 9:33 PM
I love this feeling and I love your poem, Cindi. Your portrayed this emotion beautifully. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Webster Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Congrats, Cindi.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 11:48 AM
you described it superbly!! Congrats on your win
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 11:01 AM
What a comfortable scene you have created with this wonderful poem, Cindi! Congrats on your win :)
Awtry Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 10:18 AM
Back with congratulations <3
Canerdy Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 9:25 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Cindi! Janice
Awtry Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 7:41 PM
"my alarm clock snores on"--I finished the poem and thought how contented it felt and then DUH...that's the title!
Rockwell Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Great praise! Haha! I did go to church after, only adding to the contentment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 8:41 AM
I can feel contentment washing over me reading this... success! :))) Good luck in the contest, xomo!
Rockwell Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Thank you!
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