Contemplation

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Arthur Vaso.


When we are young 
Only dreams dance in our heads
Lover’s trysts 
Holding hands a bliss

Then comes the trifecta of darkness
The long hours job
The stack of bills on the table
The divorce lawyer taking what’s left

I ponder and contemplate
As I sit on my throne
How to did it come down to this
All this constipation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/27/2015 8:06:00 AM
Love your play with words!!! The last line though!!! Didn't expect that! lol! The constipation of contemplation! I've got to say, I'm really enjoying your poetry... thanks for visiting my page,otherwise, I wouldn't have come across such fine verses this morning! Will be reading much more from you! Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2015 10:27:00 PM
Tiss I who should thank you, and I do, many a thanks!
Date: 5/26/2015 10:15:00 AM
Love the final stanza Arthur and the picture too.....Sharon G.
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Sharon!
Date: 5/18/2015 11:55:00 AM
I wonder.....
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2015 10:26:00 PM
I do too, then some days I am relieved!
Date: 5/18/2015 6:56:00 AM
ahh nice play on words with that last stanza. clever
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2015 11:36:00 AM
Why thank you! :)
Date: 5/17/2015 10:08:00 PM
So true. Different phases of life. I am now in that second phase. Long hours job n stacks of bills...superb contemplative write. 7
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/17/2015 10:16:00 PM
Just dont make it to the last line!!!!! :)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad