Contemplation

Can you see my heart beating
through the hole gaping;
I'm shaking
like I have never been shot before
with poisonous darts
like I have never been under
the influence before
of the neural toxin needed
to turn another clock into
a compass that I'll use
to try and track you down. 
As death approaches,
I become more and more 
aware that what I have done
is much more insignificant
than what was neglected. 
A lack of action
defines the human race; 
we are lethargic by nature.
But what is love?
The pursuit of (enter noun here).
That is love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 10:44 AM
I too found that line very thought provoking, what Audrey said below. Write on! andrea
Haick Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Thought-provoking..."I become more aware that what I have don is much more insignificant than what was neglected..." Deep food for thought.. Great job Anthony! Peace and love, Audrey
Nutter Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Interesting write and imaginative reflections on life. I liked the ending where you insert a name. Very creative A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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