Line Gauthier Poet Quatrain

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Contemplating paradise

glorifying days gone by
meanwhile wasting time
i’ve got nothing more than an alibi
to make sense of this paradigm

i’m betting on a future paradise
where starry moonlit nights entice
and sunshine saves the day
while guileless children play



AP: 3rd place 2025

Submitted on April 6, 2025 for contest STEVIE WONDER sponsored by KAREN JONES  (Pastime Paradise) -  RANKED 2ND

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Karen Jones April 17, 2025 at 12:22 AM Line thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win in my contest! Enjoyed the imagery and imaginative thinking! Have a fabulous day! Line Gauthier April 17, 2025 at 7:02 AM Thank you so much Karen ~ most appreciated