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Contamination Nation

Daily we face different kinds of aggravation, but there is one type which by man has its causation, and it merits an immediate termination. But because of modern “civilization” and the greed of many a corporation, it’s doubtful we shall have the consolation of ending modern man’s contamination. I’m not talking parasites or the visitation of bacteria from eating a crustateon. I mean the one of worsening gradation. It’s environmental, and in my evaluation, is the worst of all, for it has manifestation in things consumed by us or by our inhalation of air of course! It’s an abberation for which we need to have more constertnation! Society should have mortification for what is being done. There’s no good explanation to offer our descendents. The concentration of chemicals and also of radiation along with nitrates in our soil’s fertilzation is cancer-causing, and now inflammation is affecting nearly all the population. Politicians do not act. Procrastination may very well end in our obliteration! It’s like murder through premeditation. And this murder uses no discrimination. What do you think? Is it this country’s destination to leave our kids with total devestation? Surely in this mortal realm there can be salvation! And so I finish with this small summation: Unless we act, we’ll remain, for the duration, in our station of a Contamination Nation. 4/4/18 for the Contamination Contest of Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 4/9/2018 3:07:00 PM
Unfortunately things keep getting worse, Andrea! That time machine is long overdue...I need to travel back in time, at least 5000 years! Excellent monorhyme, by the way:) Regards // paul
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Date: 4/8/2018 7:27:00 PM
A crustacean is really an arthropod, Who we found out was made by God; Is immune, To sand dune, And never modified to place in sod. Jim Horn
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:22:00 PM
I entered this contest to, mine was about the explosion in japan, I don't read your poems I put tin an app and it read to me, very good work i can learn from you for sure,
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:17:00 PM
It's worse than that. Inflammed brains is the root cause of 95% of mental illness, leading to multi-billion dollar psychopharmacology fraud, which beneficiaries are covering the truth. Worse than the financial fraud is their poisoning of millions of people worldwide. The poison makes the people ill, but they're given drugs that keep them happy -- which they call "functional" and "doing well" or "improved".
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Date: 4/6/2018 2:40:00 PM
a very loud, very sharp, desperately needed drum. Earth matricide / suicide is final
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Date: 4/6/2018 6:34:00 AM
Wow, you did a great job with the monorhyming! And a powerful message. Good to read you again, Andrea, hope you are well.
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Date: 4/6/2018 5:28:00 AM
When the environment goes so does our health..Well said Andrea
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:34:00 AM
This is a magnificent Creation ... is this really our Nation or is it just my Imagination....
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Date: 4/5/2018 10:06:00 PM
I like this one a lot Andrea :) such a well rhymed and crafted "shout out"....WE are the parasites to mother earth...maybe she'll just shake us off like fleas one day! Good message :)
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Date: 4/4/2018 8:16:00 PM
I love Rap Poetry and this one is no exception. Really good write.
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Date: 4/4/2018 12:20:00 PM
Sadly we are a species that will bring about our own destruction because of the inability to look beyond ourselves and immediate gratification from perceptions that we create to justify our selfish desire for immortality because we cannot comprehend we are mere mortals, so we become a destroyer of worlds without fear, the contamination is not the nation...it is us, we are the contamination...good luck my fellow contaminate
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:37:00 PM
Yes, we all have some part in it. However, we cannot control the stupid FDA and the horrid things they allow to be used in our foods and drinks.
Date: 4/4/2018 11:18:00 AM
You speak the truth Andrea! We have a new EPA now ..they should read your poem! Well expressed as always..best for a win with this important theme.
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Date: 4/4/2018 10:32:00 AM
powerfully penned monorhyme with a great message Andrea! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/4/2018 10:05:00 AM
A wonderful write indeed...Clarity lights up this poem and the message clearly seen...All the best Andrea...
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:51:00 AM
Great powerful write Andrea... So true words... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:47:00 AM
Well said Andrea, all countries seem to think that it is not their problem. What sort of world are we leaving our descendants. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:26:00 AM
Great monorhyme Andrea and on an important subject...
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:22:00 AM
Well said! There is so much going on at the moment and not much if it is good.
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