Consumer Mess-Ed-Ages

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t.v.'s mind mirror reflects upside down side-ways and backwards ---in past missed ages masked sages massed stages'as mixed ages watched ---now t.v. consumes massed stages mask age'as missed sages messed ages as ads stans sand

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/20/2021 2:30:00 PM

Creative!

Sand Blown
Date: 2/20/2021 7:15:00 PM

...thanks...things can take a while to manifest as words : ) stan sand

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/12/2021 12:15:00 AM

Message coming through loud and clear, Stan like my big flat hypnotic tv, great word stripping, and play, cheers David

Sand Blown
Date: 2/15/2021 8:25:00 PM

...thanks dave....a consumer culture can lead people thru their day so subtly it's hypnotic at times.....stan sand

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/10/2021 6:51:00 AM

My head is spinning :)) Nice one! Linda

Sand Blown
Date: 2/10/2021 12:44:00 PM

thanks.....t.v. media is as thee social teaching device...like something out of science fiction....kinda weird at times... stan sand

Anil Deo

Date: 2/9/2021 7:01:00 PM

creative, provocative, meditative contribution. ThanX, DEO

Sand Blown
Date: 2/10/2021 12:43:00 PM

thanks for the reply....was trying to make a play on the word 'messages'.....stan sand