Consumed

In times as these and at our age as we tread gently towards the twilight I’m always surprised we’re not all obsessed with cleaning up our act trying our best to make amends instead of being consumed by greed and pettiness AP: Honorable Mention 2020 posted on March 6, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/7/2019 5:36:00 AM

"making amends" - wouldn't that be the mature thing to do? Some just would not want to do something like that which might HELP them conquer the bridge to heaven and make it easier to cross over.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 9:06:00 AM

I think these people really believe there is nothing bigger than themselves... inconceivable to the rest of us.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2019 9:56:00 PM

Wise words, Line. I like your insight here. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2019 10:03:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Laura.