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no soldier ever kissed the soil they bled on for its sake ... no leader ever bled for the young lives giv'n to their charge ... no mother ever wept for a cause, torn straight from her womb; the oceans of the earth could not catch the tears lost to war. ~ 1st Place ~ in the FFI Series 78 "Daryush" Form, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. This form is called a "Daryush", labelled after and inspired by Elizabeth Daryush, the English poet who lived from 1887-1977. It is a 6/5/3 syllabic triplet style series that encompasses a complete thought or sentence therein.

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Date: 2/23/2020 10:37:00 AM
Very poignant. Nicely done, Greg.
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Date: 2/23/2020 7:53:00 AM
Words of wisdom...Well done
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