Conscription and Boyhood

The coarse green fatigues 
etches away at me, cracking 
and burning my skin. 
The hands I once so warmly held 
are replaced with the cold sternness 
of pistol grips. 

Every shot of my gun whips
me into form, chipping away 
the soft ends of me. They hammer hard
as the army sculptures another soldier.  
I've forgotten the lift of careless laughter
as these muscles tense and freeze.

As we march and our boots thump 
against hard mud in this dark jungle, 
I feel this cold settle in and wonder  
if this is the passing of boyhood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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