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Connie, you were a singing lark Your lovely warbling is now stilled To a strange domain, you have slipped Here you were a reigning monarch Unrivalled in charm and splendour To many you were a mentor Can't accept the grim truth so stark Gone you’re in the wink of an eye We like to think it’s just a lie Leaving an indelible mark You have abruptly quit the scene Never to come back with your sheen You will shine as light in the dark We will not forget you dear friend The vacuum left, none can mend Connie you were a singing lark Here you were a reigning monarch Can't accept the grim truth so stark Leaving an indelible mark, You will shine as light in the dark ___________________________ Sept.19.2022

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Date: 9/22/2022 10:34:00 PM
Valsa, I love your lines "Here you were a reigning monarch." It seems ironic that she died within a week of the Queen, as Connie was also a monarch of sorts, ever gracious, kind, benevolent, and unifying. "Unrivalled in charm and splendour", You honor her memory so well with your tribute, and I smile each time I read it. To compare her to a singing lark is such perfect imagery. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:16:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear John. I know she has been so dear to many here. While writing this, I had in mind Queen Elizabeth , the reigning monarch of Great Britain who died two weeks earlier to Connie's passing away. Connie too has been a monarch in her own way ! Thanks a lot for liking this humble tribute!
Date: 9/20/2022 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to our dear friend Connie. Thank you for using her poetry form to honor her, Valsa. Your words are true and comforting. Blessings my dear friend, Bill
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Valsa George
Date: 9/24/2022 12:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill for ever encouraging me with your kind and generous words. Of course now we are in the grip of a shock.
Date: 9/19/2022 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful Heartfelt Poetry from your tender Heart Valsa for Connie. A favorite...
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:19:00 AM
Michael, you were the first to write a tribute to Connie . I came to know of her death first from your poem. Indeed it was a moment of shock and disbelief! Thanks for your sweet comment.
Date: 9/19/2022 11:04:00 AM
I look in the newspaper every day for her obit, but not yet! Aloha!
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:20:00 AM
But here there is plenty ! I have read so many already !
Date: 9/19/2022 7:09:00 AM
You've done a wonderful job with this, Valsa. I hope that Connie is looking down at all of these and reading them! Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:59:00 AM
She must be happy with her friends in Poetry Soup and will be mighty glad on reading our heartfelt words. Thanks a lot dear Lasaad.
Date: 9/19/2022 4:26:00 AM
A lovely tribute to Connie, Valsa. Her poetic prowess shines in your splendid words. You honor her with this poem in the form she invented.
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot Vijay.... ! She has been a great poet and a fine person.
Date: 9/19/2022 2:08:00 AM
Im seeing beautiful tributes to our dear Connie, shows how much she was loved by her fellow poets. Enjoy your week ahead Valsa. Tom
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Date: 9/19/2022 4:25:00 AM
So many poems I too have seen. That shows how popular she has been. Only after her going away I have seen this beautiful form of verse invented by her. Thank you dear Tom.

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