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connections, everything they are, without love, just solituide, see's afar, with connection, the doors flung ajar, never mind your reflection, keep corrosion off your connection, though sun sets on Zanzibar... thank you Gail Doyle..... Don

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 7:32:00 PM
"keep corrosion off" i liked that line.
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:13:00 PM
What a wonderful write here my friend! I love how you bring into the mix that, "without love, just solitude, see's afar" that is sad to be without love...I know, I've been there, so have we all been there! But if you do have the connection your doors can come flying open! This is a fantastic poem Don! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:35:00 PM
Nice dedication to one of Soups brightest stars. Michael
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:55:00 PM
ah love is the magic of the universe, without it shades of grey the curse, so keep it right ...this sweet delight, cos happiness can disperse...

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