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This work of art reveals my reflection though it's a painting and not a mirror in this image, I find a connection of a man who lived a life without fear no burdens do I find etched in his eyes from time, that drips upon a life well spent appears younger than his well-worn disguise his confidence and stature are present from the gray beard to the familiar hat is my wish for quiet conversation to hear his truth, to then find where we're at I will listen to his life's narration 6/5/22 contest Pastel Poetry sponsor Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/16/2022 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Frederic.
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Date: 7/16/2022 5:44:00 AM
Wonderful insight, Frederick, to my painting. Thank you. I really appreciate how you put yourself in the man's stead to understand him. "no burdens do I find etched in his eyes from time, that drips upon a life well spent appears younger than his well-worn disguise his confidence and stature are present" ... worn and weary yet stalwart to carry on. ˜Terrilynn, TravelingArtista
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/16/2022 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, dear artist, you have a talent most wish they could have...really nice painting
Date: 7/13/2022 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations for your win with this great poem Frederic :)
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Date: 7/12/2022 11:29:00 PM
Excellent poem.....I can see the connection...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:15:00 PM
I bet he has some wonderful stories to tell. Of the sea, of life’s adventures. Wonderful Frederic! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/21/2022 6:34:00 PM
Your "confidence and stature are present." It is easy to identify within your words. The reflection of who you are is evident, the connection is clear. This is beautiful in so many wonderful ways. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/22/2022 11:58:00 AM
You're welcome. That makes sense. :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/22/2022 10:59:00 AM
thank you Brandy, in some ways the picture reminded me of me...

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