Conjugal Forms

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I'm getting the same lectures even though I'm locked away like Rapunzel

(each paragraph of this poem is a Haiku 5–7–5 syllables) I need to avoid unimportant distractions so my parents say Exhausting yourself in intimate situations is dumb at your age This is a yearly lecture that I know by heart - they must think me loose. Surely you jest... could you be suggesting a conjugal visit? Where do I find the form needed to apply for that? Do you have a pen?

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/8/2020 11:59:00 AM

According to God, females are best suited to give birth between the ages of 13-15 and males are all washed up by the age of 18 for quality and quantity, but men always know better than God, so you MUST stay locked in your room until you are old enough to - in great pain - give birth to a defective child because mankind always knows what is best for other people to do to make them happy! Just ask Trump! Aloha! Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/9/2020 11:32:00 AM

Or you could consider that British girls finish school at age 14 for vocational careers - or age 16 for professional careers whereas you are still in school simply because your culture wants to "protect" you from reality! Aloha! Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/9/2020 11:31:00 AM

You might want to read my report on the Apache puberty rite for girls where - over four days - a girl must demonstrate to the satisfaction of Tribal Elders that she can perform all the tasks required of an adult woman whether menarche occurs at age 11, or later! Aloha! Rico

Anais Vionet
Date: 8/9/2020 4:06:00 AM

Yes, God made us ready to conceive at 13... we're all very mature and ready then .. NOT =] Thanks Rico!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/8/2020 8:57:00 AM

As I read this it makes me wonder if my daughters had the same thoughts about me being an overbearing father when they were your age. Perhaps one day I will ask them.

Anais Vionet
Date: 8/8/2020 11:22:00 AM

That might be a funny conversation =]