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Congressional Immunity

Why should The Congress not abide


     Or be allowed to set aside


          The laws they promulgate


               Then they'd learn why voters hate


                    The special codes behind which they hide

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in  John Freeman's "Citizens or Subjects" Contest - July 2010

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2010

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Juan Paolo Galua Date: 7/24/2010 4:59:00 AM Congratulations for this great write... enjoy it...The special codes behind which they hide ...intriguing line...hmmm Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/20/2010 11:52:00 AM Many congratulations on your win in John's contest Robert with this wonderful Limerick >> James Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 7/20/2010 11:43:00 AM Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win John’s in contest, thanks for the support. Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/20/2010 8:55:00 AM congrats on your second place!! well done!! well deserved to you! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/20/2010 5:38:00 AM Congratulations Robert on your win in John Freeman's contest "Citizens or Subjects". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/19/2010 9:17:00 PM Congratulations on a great limerick and your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/19/2010 7:42:00 PM Congrats on the 2nd place win, Bob. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/19/2010 7:40:00 PM Congratulations My Friend on taking the second place in the Wisdon Category. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/19/2010 7:27:00 PM Congrats Bob on your big win in John's political Limericks contest with this great piece.. now enjoy another win my friend.. with luv.. Login to Reply

Timothy Brumley Date: 7/19/2010 8:00:00 AM Actually those guys are so far out of touch with reality that they don't have the first clue! Hopefully the people will send them a message this election and wake them up! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/18/2010 9:31:00 PM Right on target, Bob. Moses will love it too! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 7/18/2010 9:13:00 PM Great write for the contest and sooooo true. Good luck! Dan C Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 7/18/2010 8:13:00 PM Awesome entry, Chief. Good luck. Ralphie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/18/2010 7:01:00 PM very good, Robert and so true. Login to Reply

Jerry Dinzes Date: 7/18/2010 6:16:00 PM Well, I don't find this limerick particularly funny - but it sure is dirty! Thanks... Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/18/2010 5:26:00 PM wow!! you said this in a strong way BoB.H> .. looks like a winner,, and strong witht he message.. this should be a Limerick advertisement...enjoyed it,..p.d. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/18/2010 3:33:00 PM Right between the eyes Bob on this one.. good luck in John's contest.. my entry is ZIP IT.. don't know if u read yet or not.. but I tried to be kind but direct... like yours.. with luv.. Login to Reply