Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Congressional Immunity

Why should The Congress not abide


     Or be allowed to set aside


          The laws they promulgate


               Then they'd learn why voters hate


                    The special codes behind which they hide

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in  John Freeman's "Citizens or Subjects" Contest - July 2010

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Juan Paolo Galua July 24, 2010 at 4:59 AM Congratulations for this great write... enjoy it...The special codes behind which they hide ...intriguing line...hmmm

James Fraser July 20, 2010 at 11:52 AM Many congratulations on your win in John's contest Robert with this wonderful Limerick >> James

Adeleke Adeite July 20, 2010 at 11:43 AM Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win John’s in contest, thanks for the support. Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke

Doris Culverhouse July 20, 2010 at 8:55 AM congrats on your second place!! well done!! well deserved to you!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2010 at 5:38 AM Congratulations Robert on your win in John Freeman's contest "Citizens or Subjects". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson July 19, 2010 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on a great limerick and your win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2010 at 7:42 PM Congrats on the 2nd place win, Bob.

John Freeman July 19, 2010 at 7:40 PM Congratulations My Friend on taking the second place in the Wisdon Category. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2010 at 7:27 PM Congrats Bob on your big win in John's political Limericks contest with this great piece.. now enjoy another win my friend.. with luv..

Timothy Brumley July 19, 2010 at 8:00 AM Actually those guys are so far out of touch with reality that they don't have the first clue! Hopefully the people will send them a message this election and wake them up!

Carolyn Devonshire July 18, 2010 at 9:31 PM Right on target, Bob. Moses will love it too! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak July 18, 2010 at 9:13 PM Great write for the contest and sooooo true. Good luck! Dan C

Ralph Taylor July 18, 2010 at 8:13 PM Awesome entry, Chief. Good luck. Ralphie

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2010 at 7:01 PM very good, Robert and so true.

Jerry Dinzes July 18, 2010 at 6:16 PM Well, I don't find this limerick particularly funny - but it sure is dirty! Thanks...

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2010 at 5:26 PM wow!! you said this in a strong way BoB.H> .. looks like a winner,, and strong witht he message.. this should be a Limerick advertisement...enjoyed it,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 18, 2010 at 3:33 PM Right between the eyes Bob on this one.. good luck in John's contest.. my entry is ZIP IT.. don't know if u read yet or not.. but I tried to be kind but direct... like yours.. with luv..