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Congressional Immunity

Why should The Congress not abide Or be allowed to set aside The laws they promulgate Then they'd learn why voters hate The special codes behind which they hide Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 2 in John Freeman's "Citizens or Subjects" Contest - July 2010

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Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 7/24/2010 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations for this great write... enjoy it...The special codes behind which they hide ...intriguing line...hmmm

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2010 11:52:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in John's contest Robert with this wonderful Limerick >> James

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/20/2010 11:43:00 AM

Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win John’s in contest, thanks for the support. Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/20/2010 8:55:00 AM

congrats on your second place!! well done!! well deserved to you!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2010 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations Robert on your win in John Freeman's contest "Citizens or Subjects". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/19/2010 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on a great limerick and your win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2010 7:42:00 PM

Congrats on the 2nd place win, Bob.

John Freeman

Date: 7/19/2010 7:40:00 PM

Congratulations My Friend on taking the second place in the Wisdon Category. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2010 7:27:00 PM

Congrats Bob on your big win in John's political Limericks contest with this great piece.. now enjoy another win my friend.. with luv..

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/19/2010 8:00:00 AM

Actually those guys are so far out of touch with reality that they don't have the first clue! Hopefully the people will send them a message this election and wake them up!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2010 9:31:00 PM

Right on target, Bob. Moses will love it too! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/18/2010 9:13:00 PM

Great write for the contest and sooooo true. Good luck! Dan C

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/18/2010 8:13:00 PM

Awesome entry, Chief. Good luck. Ralphie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 7:01:00 PM

very good, Robert and so true.

Jerry Dinzes

Date: 7/18/2010 6:16:00 PM

Well, I don't find this limerick particularly funny - but it sure is dirty! Thanks...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2010 5:26:00 PM

wow!! you said this in a strong way BoB.H> .. looks like a winner,, and strong witht he message.. this should be a Limerick advertisement...enjoyed it,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 3:33:00 PM

Right between the eyes Bob on this one.. good luck in John's contest.. my entry is ZIP IT.. don't know if u read yet or not.. but I tried to be kind but direct... like yours.. with luv..