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Conflicting Thoughts

she is scarred so deeply inside yet she chooses to remain beautiful gloom of darkness engulfs her yet she dons a mask of brightness stab of humiliation slices her yet she attempts to bandage her wounds in her solitary moments she keeps wondering if her life is worth living and the war she is waging, worth the struggle she is a pearl locked in an oyster but unless someone digs it out its lustre will be lost to the world and shall perish in the caverns of the sea trapped and enslaved...... will she break the shell herself and come out? from slushy swamps, will she be able to walk to gilded palaces? from a pawn on the chessboard, will she ever rise as the reigning queen? such thoughts torment her from inside even when she knows she is beautiful in and out and her worth is beyond measure she can’t bear to be treated as a tiny bug to be swatted at and done away with! August.17. 2022 ~ Placed First~ Inner Conflict Poetry Contest Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 8/24/2022 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on First Place, Valsa! Your poem is absolutely beautiful! Your first two lines drew me in. There's an aura surrounding the shell and the pearl. Love it!
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Date: 8/23/2022 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the fabulous win, Valsa! I could feel the tragedy her existence and also the determination of her will to be authentic. It is ashamed so many feel this way in the world today. We should all be able to let our lights shine. Your poem touched my soul. This is a Fav for me, Valsa. My prayer is that many will find a way for their lights to shine out of darkness. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 8/17/2022 4:33:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to the turmoil within. Emotive thoughts well conveyed, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 8/17/2022 1:35:00 AM
Many don't show their struggle with inner demons and hide it well, often thinking seeking help is a weakness. Best of luck Valsa. Tom
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Date: 8/17/2022 1:00:00 AM
Life is always worth living, although moments come when i doubt it. Hugs.
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