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Confiding In Someone

Often I've been accused of being too righteous and wise; a zealot putting all his efforts in an unquestionable faith, and my trust is never weakened by a delayed promise. Others have gone from this earthly place, to rest in unattended graves; I've been derided by their indignant, loud laughter, and you think I would have been intimitated by their offensive words? Never did I react unkindly, just ignored them and walked away, not knowing that they would have been cursed and faced punishment; and with premonition, I had foreseen every event of their destiny. Today, confiding in someone who will take time to listen... will give me a reliance not smeared with absurd ridicule; I can give good advice: unforgettable words that will remain. Confide in selfless, trustworthy friends who show concern and self-assurance, by their deeds you will know the trueness of their evident honesty; so why wait and not run to one as I... and not start living without reluctance?

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Date: 6/5/2010 9:52:00 AM
thanks for your kind advice packaged in beautiful lines. cheers suresh
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:29:00 AM
Good advice Andrew.rgds Brian
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:42:00 AM
very well written. a conversation with oneself, and the reader, a bystander...
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