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Confidently Careful

When lines are drawn, actions made known - one must recognize as emotions take shape A collection of thoughts are with talent, poetically touched- so cleverly bent Once and no more, will expectations rise and fall - without being completely gone I am, Confidently Careful here and now, after all When the heart reaches out, it is felt- without a doubt one must recognize as emotions take shape, Never to share a whisper, and then be silent to poetically touch- so cleverly Once and no more, will expectations rise and fall - without being completely gone I am, Confidently Careful here and now, after all - When lines are drawn, actions made known - _____________________ ~ Thoughts from the Heart ~

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Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 7:56:00 AM

What an amazing poem, this is what all poets should aim to achieve, to inspire and write words that make people feel happy... Beautiful words Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/29/2018 12:41:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. A heart is fragile, and should be handled with care. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/28/2018 3:09:00 PM

wonderful way to express your individuality...a most dignified write, brandy...huggs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/28/2018 4:18:00 PM

There are so many moments, emotions in poetry. Thank you nette. I appreciate your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/28/2018 1:38:00 PM

Hi Brandy, You are a very precise poet who chooses her poetic phrases and words with optimum skill. All your poems are an absolute pleasure to read and re-read! Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/28/2018 2:42:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, your thoughts truly humble me. Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you from the depth of my heart. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. You are so kind. Many blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/27/2018 4:55:00 PM

Your poem cleverly draws out the discourse of emotions..seeking to be recognized. When heart reaches out it is indeed felt..and as you explain:Once and no more, will expectations rise and fall - without being completely gone. Heart is delicate, yet complex..so is your poem, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/27/2018 6:46:00 PM

Even though emotions, expectations rise and fall. The heart remains open, to some degree- but is always cautious. Careful. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 12/27/2018 4:50:00 PM

One must recognize the moment as emotions take shape; I have always been a bit naïve and not recognized the moment and undoubtedly many moments have come and gone. Nicely written Brandy, your heart once again speaks softly. All the best me friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/27/2018 6:42:00 PM

Sometimes, one might not truly understand how such emotions could take shape- around the heart. But, when they do- saying nothing sometimes hurts worse, than saying too much. Boundaries made and not broken, yet no words are spoken. Thank you John. I appreciate your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy